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as leaves in Autumn words blow somewhere with the wind ~below your feet died~

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 10/7/2023 3:03:00 PM

I agree...sometimes my words disappear in the wind and die below my feet. Well said, Maria. A lovely, metaphorical Haiku. enjoy your day, Sara

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 10/8/2023 12:22:00 PM

Thank you very much Sara. Facts stay, words blow..true. Have a lovely Sundayxxx

Bill Baker

Date: 10/6/2023 5:08:00 PM

I liked the Haiku and the lovely photo of the ducks, Maria. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 10/7/2023 2:00:00 AM

Thanks my friend. Hugsxxxx

Yann Rolland

Date: 10/5/2023 2:50:00 PM

romantic and so sweet metaphor, thanks for sharing yann

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 10/5/2023 3:02:00 PM

Thank you so much Yann. Love María

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/5/2023 1:13:00 PM

- Hope your words will never die, Maria - Great written :) - hugs

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 10/5/2023 1:20:00 PM

Thank you Anne. I also hope the same for you, because you have so much to teach. I think you have the gold medal. We try to learn from you. Have a nice evening my friend. Hugsxxx