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Word Morph -- Tide To Wave

TIDE to WAVE The coming dawn brings the TIDE Across the shore, it spread so WIDE Inward slowly, I start to WADE It carries me in, with its WAVE Author's note: This is just a try don't know if it's done right..lol....Maryam

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/14/2009 1:48:00 PM

Wow you did this so nice and easy Maryam! I can't seem to get a handle on one. grumble Light & Love Debbie

Robin L. Gass

Date: 1/14/2009 1:16:00 PM

Awesome!!!! You did an excellent job, Maryam. I hope you enter. A contender for sure! I love the content as well as the form. Love, Robin

Chitra Lakhera

Date: 1/14/2009 2:46:00 AM

Seems like perfect to me. Nicely said. Love, Chitra

Mohamed Shokry

Date: 1/13/2009 5:50:00 PM

Great word morph , i didn't know about it till now.

Sharon Winter

Date: 1/13/2009 4:48:00 PM

Looks like you did it fine! It is not easy, that's for sure! Good job! Love, Shar

John Loving Iii

Date: 1/13/2009 2:32:00 PM

yes you did it right! give that lady a prize. JHL

Jen H.

Date: 1/13/2009 2:28:00 PM

I like it Maryam, I think it's really well done, but then again I never have been very god at word morphs. haha Lots of love ~Jen~

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/13/2009 2:12:00 PM

Looks perfect to me!! Good job! ~ Carrie