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Woodland Path

Fae circles of mushrooms
Lanky yellow toadstools
Firm jelly tot larvae 
Feed from rich stagnant pools.
Fungal disks cling with wanton 
To the grey trunks of trees
Cricket strums join to bird song
Sending messages of peace.

Lambent beams break through foliage
Gradient tones tint the scene
Yellow, purple, and whites
showcased by backgrounds of green.
Fractured rock nests bright flora
Compost mats engage moss
A place of breach and survival.
Nature's gain, (one might say) 
is the product of loss.

Copyright © Michelle Mac Donald

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  1. Date: 2/11/2015 9:25:00 PM
    Mikki you have painted such a vivid picture, I can see every detail so clearly.I find myself listening for the dulcet tones of an army of frogs serenading. J J Tolkien could have used your words to descibe the Great Greenwood, for this is just how I imagined a path through it would look. Another favourite and I wish that one day I could write half as well as you my dear friend. Love Shane xxxx

  1. Date: 1/28/2015 8:20:00 AM
    Great lines with blesed words. Thanks for the magnificient share. I hope the new year is going well so far..

  1. Date: 12/19/2014 9:51:00 AM
    I just love the imagery in this write! Thanks for sharing!

  1. Date: 12/17/2014 3:05:00 PM
    A wonderful poem.Congrat.Best wishes of the season,O.B.

  1. Date: 10/2/2014 4:03:00 PM
    I shudder to think how many stray cats live in our neighborhood. We sometimes have 9 for breakfast on the porch, but there are new ones turning up all the time. They live under houses, under porches, in hollow logs. An adorable long hair tiger cat, half grown turned up on the steps, reluctant to come on the porch. There are probably 3 or 4 more living under the house next door. Aint nature grand. Love, daver

  1. Date: 4/3/2013 4:34:00 PM
    This is so full of amasing images. I could almost smell the damp earth and start looking for magic mosses. Thanks for your welcome to me today. luv, Suz

  1. Date: 3/30/2013 12:53:00 PM
    I want to stroll this path, barefoot and feel that wet green moss between my toes. I also - before such a venture - want to lose about 50 years. This poem would give me a fuzzy feeling on my teeth, that is if I had any teeth. Love, daver

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 12:44:00 AM
    I love this Michelle, you paint a nice picture. you have a blessed day ;}

  1. Date: 12/30/2012 3:03:00 AM
    an amazing poem, in which one gets enveloped in its creation, this is going to my fav with you.... Happy New Year...

  1. Date: 12/16/2012 6:57:00 PM
    wonderful I love this poem it is so rich with detail keep up the great work your friend Nita

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 6:15:00 PM
    Could very well be a place where fairies hold their sweet reveries. Reminds me of what I see when out for my walks.

  1. Date: 12/2/2012 3:39:00 PM
    You going to make me come up there and shake another poem out of you?? Come on//// tell kiwi to whisper in your ear! HUGS

  1. Date: 11/22/2012 8:33:00 AM
    wow, a very well crafted and descriptive nature poem. Glad to finally have read this one of yours, and I want to wish you happy thanksgiving. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 9/22/2012 10:53:00 AM
    Beautiful ecological imagery!... Terry (BTW: In 'Gypsy Guy', the 'boss man' says that 'everybody gains' because for him (the 'boss man'), Gypsy Guy is a nobody, a nothing, subhuman at best... and therfore not part of 'everybody...) (&Thanks for your kind words)

  1. Date: 9/17/2012 11:48:00 PM
    Love it all the way through ;}

  1. Date: 9/7/2012 5:20:00 PM
    enjoyed reading this natural write.

  1. Date: 9/6/2012 1:54:00 PM
    Lovely, lovely - images dance in my head. I love mushrooms, not to injest...just the fae quality of their independent nature. Great stuff!! ps...Granny was Irish/North American Indian, so we love the lore...

  1. Date: 8/30/2012 3:44:00 AM
    Loved this nocturnal image of fairy lore- It reminded me of the fairy queen of Shakespeare's mid summer nights dream - lovely - I did a painting of this image from an old master painting but changed the character into a bear fairy . I will try and post it if I can work out how to. Love and blessings, bren : )

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 10:03:00 PM
    Life depends on other life. I like the images of a forest. I live in NYC but try to get away a few times a year to see and walk in forests. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 8/24/2012 3:06:00 PM
    you paint a very vivid picture of this woodland path, I enjoyed the scene, and thank you for stopping by my poems with such uplifting comments :-)