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Wonders of Water

Wide oceans, wandering rivers, wild waterfalls water bursts forth and invigorate the senses. Requisite and essential to life, it flows freely spreading it's liquid magic throughout our world. Follow water's fluid pathways over the earth from precipitation seen in rain, sleet and snow to crystallization, where water changes into a frosty, winter wonderland of frozen icicles. We mere mortals could never become impermeable to the life sustaining benefits of water, for we depend upon it for hydration, like breathing, and for life. For we are made of water, and without it, we would die. Written on 4/5/2016

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Date: 6/29/2016 5:57:00 PM
Felt I had to read one of your poems after receiving your feedback on my blog about poetry soup. I chose wisely and give it a 7. Best poem. Your passion shows through. Best wishes - David from NZ
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Laura Leiser
Date: 6/29/2016 10:05:00 PM
Thank you, David! You are too kind :)
Date: 5/20/2016 12:55:00 PM
BRAVO Laura. A celebration of water in its majesty and glory. Where indeed would we be without it? Well done indeed! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 4/15/2016 7:39:00 AM
I enjoyed drinking in the words of your poem and, having done so, got up from the keyboard and went to pour myself a glass.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 4/15/2016 8:28:00 AM
Haha!! Glad you liked it!
Date: 4/7/2016 6:59:00 PM
Very good write Laura... best wishes
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Laura Leiser
Date: 4/15/2016 5:28:00 PM
Thank you, Connie! It makes me happy to know you liked it :)
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Laura Leiser
Date: 4/7/2016 7:14:00 PM
Thank you, Joseph :)
Date: 4/7/2016 4:44:00 PM
Laura, you have penned a lovely poem, best of luck in the contest, and I am loving it 7 ~
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Laura Leiser
Date: 4/7/2016 7:12:00 PM
Thank you, Connie! It makes me happy to know you liked it :)
Date: 4/6/2016 8:50:00 PM
Very strong free verse my friend. Excellence weaving of the life force known as water. A7
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Laura Leiser
Date: 4/6/2016 11:34:00 PM
Thank you, Robert :)
Date: 4/5/2016 11:59:00 AM
Laura a wonderful poem, good luck!-luloo
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Laura Leiser
Date: 4/5/2016 2:45:00 PM
Thanks, Laura! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
Date: 4/5/2016 11:38:00 AM
I feel good in your poem. Friendly Aquarius
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Laura Leiser
Date: 4/5/2016 2:44:00 PM
Thank you, Ovidiu! I'm glad you related to my poem :)
Date: 4/5/2016 11:28:00 AM
Great take on the water theme - it is quite a challenge to weave the 6 words into a poem:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Laura Leiser
Date: 4/5/2016 2:44:00 PM
Thanks, Jan! I'm glad you liked it :)

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