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Wonderland

You and I in a wondrous place, We’ll hide and love in this romantic place. We hear silence in a fairy like lawn, Our noisy steps are trembling in a grassy mud zone. We promise eternity in a secret garden. You hold my hands and assured me no burden. We promise to be forever with two eyes closed. Sweet good kisses were our magical utmost. We found a mystic place for us! Hunters won’t even dare to look for us! We ran out from home and found ourselves together, In a greatest wonderland that will last forever. We pretended flying on air in a gentle good night. Our love is all well prepared for a magical flight. I love you and we’ll make a bunch of our own love stories, I see ourselves grow old telling these countless stories.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/25/2015 11:44:00 PM
Lei, l just stopped by to say congratulations on your win:-)Alexis
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Date: 8/25/2015 6:04:00 PM
Enjoyed, congratulations
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Date: 8/25/2015 3:24:00 AM
Wonderful write Lei! Congrats on big win!
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Date: 8/24/2015 11:01:00 PM
Hi Lei. Congratulations on your sweet Romantic WIN... SKAT
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Date: 3/10/2015 5:31:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats Lei:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/9/2015 4:18:00 PM
Lei, Congratulations, on your win. Stop by my latest blog "BEGINNINGS" if you'd like. Hope you are having a Wonderful Day, thank you for supporting my contest -Always & Forever- LINDA
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Date: 12/31/2014 7:40:00 PM
you transported me to a magical mystical world - lovely descriptive write:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/31/2014 5:12:00 AM
Sends tingles up my spine. A conclusion to a successful love affair. Awesome.
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