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Wonderland

chasing the dream falling into a scheme screaming as I fall nails scratch the wall going down down down wake in a new place hands reach and rub my face people come to greet me and they all agree I'm not from this land so they take my hand and lead me to the queen (who is quite mean!) all dressed in red from toes to head then I meet an extraordinary man who tells me how this world began next to him are a mouse and hare who go thru life without a care that is where I meet the cat who gives the man back his hat a smile set upon his face randomly appearing in a different place taking me to see a girl in white who asks me to join the fight against the dragon who roams the skies above their homes I must agree for is my destiny dressed in my silver suit ready to beat the brute his wing flap against my face why am I in this place!? my sword comes down in a crash he had no time to dash now he’s dead and I must leave but the man grabs my sleeve and dances a little jig and tells me that the world’s no to big I give hugs and say goodbye never shall these memories die when back at my palace I spoke my name aloud “Alice.”

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Date: 3/14/2013 3:13:00 PM
Congrats on your great win..Sara
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Ashley Last
Date: 3/14/2013 5:02:00 PM
Thank you, it's very nice of you to congratulate me!
Date: 3/13/2013 5:23:00 PM
Hi, Ashley,,, i like the way you free verse this winning poem.. your poem is amazing! I love it;-)! Congratulations on your wonderful poem~ always*LINDA
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Ashley Last
Date: 3/14/2013 5:01:00 PM
Thank you so much! I'm so excited!
Date: 3/10/2013 4:41:00 PM
Seems to be my most popular poem.
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Date: 3/10/2013 3:30:00 PM
Thank You for reading my poems, feel free to look at some of my others too...
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Date: 3/10/2013 12:48:00 PM
This is based on the newer version with the Jabberwocky, not the older version.
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