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Below is the poem entitled Wonderland which was written by poet Ashley Petersen. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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chasing the dream
falling into a scheme

screaming as I fall
nails scratch the wall

going down

wake in a new place
hands reach and rub my face

people come to greet me
and they all agree

I'm not from this land
so they take my hand

and lead me to the queen
(who is quite mean!)

all dressed in red
from toes to head

then I meet an extraordinary man
who tells me how this world began

next to him are a mouse and hare
who go thru life without a care

that is where I meet the cat
who gives the man back his hat

a smile set upon his face
randomly appearing in a different place

taking me to see a girl in white
who asks me to join the fight

against the dragon who roams
the skies above their homes

I must agree
for is my destiny

dressed in my silver suit 
ready to beat the brute

his wing flap against my face
why am I in this place!?

my sword comes down in a crash
he had no time to dash

now he’s dead and I must leave
but the man grabs my sleeve

and dances a little jig
and tells me that the world’s no to big

I give hugs and say goodbye
never shall these memories die

when back at my palace
I spoke my name aloud

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  1. Date: 3/15/2013 11:46:00 PM
    Congrats Ashley.... cheers

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 3:13:00 PM
    Congrats on your great win..Sara

    Petersen Avatar Ashley Petersen
    Date: 3/14/2013 5:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, it's very nice of you to congratulate me!
  1. Date: 3/13/2013 5:23:00 PM
    Hi, Ashley,,, i like the way you free verse this winning poem.. your poem is amazing! I love it;-)! Congratulations on your wonderful poem~ always*LINDA

    Petersen Avatar Ashley Petersen
    Date: 3/14/2013 5:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much! I'm so excited!
  1. Date: 3/10/2013 4:41:00 PM
    Seems to be my most popular poem.

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 3:30:00 PM
    Thank You for reading my poems, feel free to look at some of my others too...

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 3:19:00 PM
    wonderful girl!

    Petersen Avatar Ashley Petersen
    Date: 3/10/2013 3:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thx, girl friend!
  1. Date: 3/10/2013 12:48:00 PM
    This is based on the newer version with the Jabberwocky, not the older version.