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Wondering Through My Day

there are many things in life I ponder as I wonder through my days the answers trip me up I chose not to believe in gravity for I was a lawless man planning my own escape the angels all thought that I was foolish for their brother had fallen forever bound to earth I looked to the heavens for an answer instead of looking inward towards eternity a piece of everything is part of me for my Savior lives within all of His creation Amy Green's "Let's Try a Little Kimo" Contest.

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Darlene Gifford

Date: 9/18/2014 10:56:00 AM

He lives in us and walks with us and talks to us. I think that must have been a song I once heard. Anyway, I liked your ponder and wonder rhyme scheme. But as you wonder through your days, you'll be ok, because He is there with you helping you figure out life's answers. Don't you think?

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/19/2014 8:39:00 AM

Yes I am more than okay, if you are interested in my story and how God answered my hearts cry, go to amazon.ca or amazon.com. My book is available as an ebook for any ebook reader. It can be found by author Richard J. Lamoureux the title is "DUMMY, Hurtful and Healing Words".

Mel Merrill

Date: 6/4/2014 12:23:00 PM

Hi Richard. I've been reading some of your writes...wish there were more. Let's have a new one to enjoy :) Hope all is well, and thanks for your support...Mel :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/3/2014 7:47:00 AM

Upon rereading this one it fits perfectly with my "Ending at the beggining" poem.

Monterey Sirak

Date: 6/3/2014 6:00:00 AM

Beautiful, powerful, inspirational! I could go on and on singing this one's praises.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/3/2014 7:53:00 AM

Oops, see my comment to you above.

Sarai Virden

Date: 5/29/2014 3:43:00 PM

Yes He does...Well done Rick!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/29/2014 3:51:00 PM

Thanks Sarai.

Kim Van Breda

Date: 5/29/2014 10:11:00 AM

Cool Richard !! Great write. the last stanza stands out for me. We only have to study God's creation to marvel at His intimacy with us as individuals. Xx~Xx

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/29/2014 10:26:00 AM

Good morning and thanks Kim.

Deborah Shiells

Date: 5/28/2014 10:48:00 AM

Hi Richard, This was easy flowing and spoke of life in a very spiritually gentle way. Full of wisdom. Great read my friend. Best of luck in the contest:~) Love and Peace, Deborah

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/28/2014 12:36:00 PM

Thanks again Deborah.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 5/28/2014 7:17:00 AM

great poem Rick gl in contest hugs

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/28/2014 9:07:00 AM

Thanks for the good luck Shadow.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 5/28/2014 7:03:00 AM

Wonderful, Richard. Your faith had always been a source of encouragement to me. Thank you for keeping in touch. Hugs

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/28/2014 9:06:00 AM

Hi Eileen, it is my pleasure to keep in touch.

Justin Bordner

Date: 5/28/2014 1:55:00 AM

This poem possesses tremendous wisdom, and it has a savory tempo too Richard. "I chose not to believe in gravity because I was a lawless man planning my own escape..." I truly appreciate this perspective. The inward totality of creation and Deity is so well put into this Art. A FAV. my friend. J.A.B.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/28/2014 9:05:00 AM

Wow, thanks Justin, I am honored.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/28/2014 12:21:00 AM

Great write Kimosabe! Few words and great wisdom!

Casarah Nance

Date: 5/27/2014 5:22:00 PM

Hey man, you got five kimo's going on, how awesome is that, I could only get one, great job, a challenge you have met with great skillz. good luck in the contest hun

Tim Smith

Date: 5/27/2014 2:32:00 PM

A wonderful series of Kimo's Richard...well done Tim

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/28/2014 9:04:00 AM

Thanks Tim

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 5/27/2014 9:50:00 AM

Deeply touched. Thanks for sharing, Rick! A lot of people don't know that :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/27/2014 2:13:00 PM

Thanks Toquyen.