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Wonderful Thoughts

cradled in wonderful thoughts desires rising to the for every second she sought fire in her soul lost long ago great bundles of memories homing in on her life indicating the cavernous jobules of emotions and strife knife edge she walks life hasn't been kind money in short shift no hidden treasure to find on the pebbles of life people kick at a few questions are answered revelations anews signs of a shy smile i see tuned to impress thee
Used C to T of the alphabet. penned September 4 2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 9/17/2016 7:43:00 PM
Beautiful, I have to say "on the pebbles of life people kick at a few" great lines!!! ...congratulations
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Date: 9/16/2016 1:13:00 PM
Seren, Congrats on your win in my contest with your lovely, wistful write! Blessings!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/16/2016 6:35:00 PM
thank u Kim......Seren
Date: 9/4/2016 6:08:00 PM
Beautiful, I have to say "on the pebbles of life people kick at a few" great lines!!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/6/2016 12:02:00 PM
Thank you...Seren
Date: 9/4/2016 7:40:00 AM
The hope of the future? This is excellent Seren. Perchance to dream, right? Favorite line, although there are a couple, "on the pebbles of life people kick a few" NICE!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/6/2016 12:00:00 AM
Thank you Daniel....Seren
Date: 9/4/2016 6:08:00 AM
Lovely, especially the way it ends ...
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Date: 9/6/2016 12:02:00 AM
Probir am so glad you enjoyed it......Seren
Date: 9/4/2016 6:00:00 AM
Wishful thinking of crossing again and again your Wonderful thoughts like walking in a park in search of SEREN-ity.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/6/2016 12:03:00 AM
What a nice thing to say, thank you....Seren

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