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When I held you in my arms for the very first time, Overjoyed that my baby boy was simply sublime. New life that I had pushed into the world, Darling son, oh how my emotions whirled. Every day brought us something new, Recording every moment as you grew. Filling our lives with laughter and joy, Unconditional love for our beautiful boy. Love you forever my wonderful son. Contest:- Wonderful Acrostic Sponsor:- John Hamilton 01~05~16

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Vladislav Raven

Date: 2/13/2016 1:01:00 PM

Hi Jan, a wonderful write from your golden pen. There is no Love so complete than a mother's Love How wonderful to know that you bring life into a world, how through the years you nurture and protect your child, the Love you forever shower on your child, the tears and sorrows you bear, the joys and happiness you share. A life lived. What an excellent acrostic. A seven from me Jan. Hugs....MIKE. XX

Jan Allison
Date: 2/13/2016 1:04:00 PM

Thanks Mike my son is truly wonderful and I can't help but be inspired by him with my words:-) hugs Jan xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/25/2016 9:57:00 PM

JAN, THANK YOU for blessing my comment with a reply. THAT WAS NICE OF YOU!!! PD**

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/23/2016 12:07:00 AM

JAN, Congratulations on your Wonderful-Acrostic win. Hugs --Linda--

Jan Allison
Date: 1/23/2016 8:28:00 AM

Thanks PD:-) Hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso

Date: 1/16/2016 7:10:00 PM

Oh Jan, The photo is so cute and the poem so adorable!

Jan Allison
Date: 1/16/2016 7:16:00 PM

Just a pic from the web and a poem written from the heart:-) I wrote it the day before my son returned to university:-) hugs Jan xx

Rahy Hy

Date: 1/14/2016 7:18:00 AM

Such sweet feelings Jan...Congratulations on your win ! Hugs, Rahy

Jan Allison
Date: 1/14/2016 12:02:00 PM

Thanks Rahy this was written for my wonderful son:-) hugs Jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 1/13/2016 12:58:00 AM

Congrats on ur awesome winning work Jan!!

Jan Allison
Date: 1/13/2016 3:42:00 PM

Thanks so much Dr Sharma:-) hugs Jan xx

Skat A

Date: 1/12/2016 11:46:00 PM

Jan, Congrats on your Wonderful-Acrostic. ** SKAT

Jan Allison
Date: 1/13/2016 3:41:00 PM

Thanks so much Skat:-) hugs Jan xx

Viv Wigley

Date: 1/12/2016 10:23:00 PM

A lovely, warm write, Jan, and if that isn't in his birthday card for this year, then I'm a monkey's dooberry. Well done. Viv x

Jan Allison
Date: 1/13/2016 3:41:00 PM

Have got a long way until his birthday may put it in his graduation card as it will be very appropriate then:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 1/12/2016 12:38:00 PM

Congrats on a wonderful win Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 1/12/2016 1:04:00 PM

Thanks Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx

Hansteven Selfa

Date: 1/12/2016 7:48:00 AM

Truly wonderful Jan! Congratulations on your win!

Jan Allison
Date: 1/12/2016 1:04:00 PM

Thanks Hansteven:-) hugs Jan xx

John Hamilton

Date: 1/12/2016 6:44:00 AM

What a beautiful acrostic, you are really improving in this difficult form! 37/40 Well done!

Jan Allison
Date: 1/12/2016 1:03:00 PM

Oh wow thanks John - this is dedicated to my son he really is wonderful:-) hugs Jan xx

Emile Pinet

Date: 1/9/2016 10:20:00 AM

This is a beautiful story, laid out well, described with feeling and written with the heart of a mother. Emile.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/9/2016 1:19:00 PM

Thanks Emile my son means the world to me he really is wonderful:-) hugs Jan xx

Caycay Jennings

Date: 1/7/2016 2:25:00 PM

Your turn to push my baby boy button! I enjoyed this touching poem very much - just beautiful (no pun intended about other acrostic contest) ... CayCay

Jan Allison
Date: 1/7/2016 2:29:00 PM

Thanks CayCay my son went back to university yesterday and was very touched by the poem I'd written:-) hugs Jan xx

Kp Nunez

Date: 1/7/2016 11:09:00 AM

Ah, isn't motherhood grand? Most of the time...lol! You wrote a very tender and loving poem in acrostic. all the best in the contest, Jan! hugs :-) PS. sorry about his returning to his dorm, hope you get to see him soon! hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 1/7/2016 11:11:00 AM

He has a long haul ahead for his finals but he will succeed :-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/6/2016 8:31:00 PM

hey, I thought up a subject. Take a guess what I will be showing soon!

Jan Allison
Date: 1/7/2016 10:40:00 AM

You will be showing us your wonderful poem soon lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Jean Murray

Date: 1/6/2016 5:56:00 PM

How lovely to read this on my middle daughter's 23rd birthday. Can there be a relief like when the head is born?

Jan Allison
Date: 1/7/2016 10:40:00 AM

No relief until the little one is in your arms Jean - my little one is 22 and is much taller than me lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 1/6/2016 4:26:00 PM

A lovely write, Jan, and pleased that he read it and liked it. Pity that he has to go back, but that's how life is! Hope you are all keeping well:) Hugs ~ paul

Jan Allison
Date: 1/7/2016 10:42:00 AM

He's safely back yesterday - it will be very heavy going for him now with assignments and his dissertation project but the end is in sight for him:-) hugs Jan xx

Thomas Martin

Date: 1/6/2016 3:05:00 PM

Lovely poem! Much luck in contest.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/7/2016 10:42:00 AM

Thanks Thomas:-) hugs Jan xx

Eileen Manassian

Date: 1/6/2016 12:37:00 AM

It's a wonderful poem, Jan. Very sweet. The love shines through. Good luck....

Jan Allison
Date: 1/7/2016 10:43:00 AM

My son is wonderful:-) hugs jan xx

Edward Ebbs

Date: 1/5/2016 11:27:00 PM

I think this is wonderful, great job!

Jan Allison
Date: 1/7/2016 10:39:00 AM

Thanks Ed - my son went back to university yesterday he was really touched to read the poem I wrote for him:-) hugs Jan xx

Dalia Shahein

Date: 1/5/2016 6:51:00 PM

Your wonderful my dear Jan , your son is a lucky kid to have such a kind, nice , good hearted and careful mom such as you , and I'm sure that he'll be proud and pleased with this mesmerizing, magnificent and gentle unique poem my dear , best of luck in the contest though I know that you don't need it cause it's already a winning poem 4 me , I give you a 7 and a big hug // :)

Jan Allison
Date: 1/5/2016 7:03:00 PM

He's just read it and loved it:-) hugs Jan xx

Abdul Malik

Date: 1/5/2016 6:34:00 PM

It's a good write Jan. Good luck.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/5/2016 6:39:00 PM

Thanks Abdul:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 1/5/2016 6:10:00 PM

This is Wonderful Jan. Those first years with your child are precious.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/5/2016 6:11:00 PM

He is the best thing ever to happen to me Tim - he's back to University tomorrow I am just so so proud of everything he has achieved:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/5/2016 5:57:00 PM

Ha. I would not be seen writing about MY son, but my daughter yes!! (maybe I should do that) Still thinking on this one. You did a GREAT job of it, Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/5/2016 5:59:00 PM

Thanks so much Andrea it is hard to think of a subject:-) hugs Jan xx

White Sage

Date: 1/5/2016 5:48:00 PM

excellent write Jan, i wish you the best in the contest

Jan Allison
Date: 1/5/2016 5:58:00 PM

Thanks so much White Sage:-) hugs Jan xx