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Wonder of Sunshine

Warms to the very bones Brightens life in early morn Making dew glister Rainbow prisms of color This the wonder of sunshine Written: 10/24/2012 Tanka Crazy-Sunshine Contest 2nd Place Winner

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Quoth Theraven

Date: 7/23/2019 9:13:00 AM

Carol, Still reading and left in wonder by your words. God Bless.... -Richard

Joe Maverick

Date: 4/5/2015 5:12:00 PM

Just stopping by Carol, can feel the rays..' hope to see more writes from you at some point..'

Linda Jackson

Date: 4/23/2014 2:21:00 PM

Lovely sunshine. Life always seems better when we have sunny days. Your poem brings a ray of sunshine. Best wishes Linda

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 2/7/2014 9:37:00 PM

You are right it is a true wonder. thanks for sharing.... Lucilla

Margaret Okubo

Date: 1/15/2014 7:19:00 AM

Congratulations Carol. This is really magnificent...Thanks.

Vesna Kovrlija

Date: 12/12/2013 8:48:00 AM

So warm and lovely!

Arden Gopela

Date: 10/30/2013 4:08:00 AM

Sunshine speaks of hope and rejuvination! Well-written! Your new friend on soup! Love,love,love! :-) - Den

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/11/2013 9:03:00 PM

yes you are the wonder of us all.... waiting for you to color upon us...pd

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/30/2012 2:12:00 AM

this is one i missed, and a winner too.. excellent poetry...Happy New Year...

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 12/5/2012 7:31:00 AM

Your warmth shines in this lovely write Carol! Congrats on your win! Hugs

Erich Goller

Date: 10/31/2012 10:37:00 AM

Congratulation for your winning poem, A beautiful Tanka poem.Thanks for sharing it, God bless you, Hugs!Erich

Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs

Date: 10/30/2012 1:22:00 PM

Very warming poem, that should brighten up your snow filled days, thanks so much for the comments on my poetry, stay warm and be blessed :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/30/2012 11:44:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning poem in "Sunshine" contest. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/29/2012 8:36:00 PM

CAROL..:-), CONGRATULATIONS :-) with your awesome poem in Leonora's "Tanka Crazy - Sunshine" contest. Have yourself a sweet night * Luv~PD

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/29/2012 3:15:00 PM

ohh, this is a gem, carol.. congrats with huggs!..:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/29/2012 3:05:00 PM

congratulations, CArol and a happy sunshiny day to you.

Joseph May

Date: 10/29/2012 12:23:00 PM

A Sunshine on sunshine ....congrats on a great win Carol

Isaiah Zerbst

Date: 10/29/2012 12:04:00 PM

Beautiful poem. I like the part about the rainbows.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/29/2012 11:33:00 AM

CONGRATS CAROL O AN EXCEPTIONAL WRITE AND WONDROUS WIN LUV .. SUNSHINE IS ONE PERFECT THING IN LIFE .. STAY SAFE FROM 'SANDY'.. WE R IN THE MIDST OF HER WRATH NOW ..

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 10/29/2012 10:03:00 AM

Big congratulations on you win xx

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/29/2012 8:21:00 AM

Great new word! GLISTER old english cool Carol! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/29/2012 5:42:00 AM

Thank you to each and everyone who has commented or congratulated this poem. You are all so greatly appreciated. I am glad it made you happy also Leonora. Thank you. Love, Carol XXXXXX

Len Gasun

Date: 10/29/2012 5:39:00 AM

Congratulations my friend Carol for winning 2nd Place in my contest “Crazy Sunshine”. You filled me up with so much happiness while reading your splendid poem. Thank you so much for your full support . May the sun shines in your life always. Love/hug, Leonora

Anne Rutherford

Date: 10/26/2012 5:06:00 PM

Carol, sunshine makes everyone feel better' Great Tanka poem. Anne

Mohammad Yamin

Date: 10/25/2012 3:42:00 PM

This fine Tanka is surely a winner, Carol. Your writings have always impressed me. Thanks also for your kind comments on my Tanka The Candle. -Mohammad