Women

Women ( Acrostic ) W... Women have a story, since the begining of time. O...Over the centries, we have come a long way. M... Mothers we become - for that is our role in life. E... Every man should be grateful, that a woman gave him birth. N... Never underestimate a woman - for you could be surprised... 03/06/2014 Written by Lucilla M. Carrillo Note; Just a small tribute to us women on Woman's Day. Hope you Like it...

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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 6/8/2014 4:26:00 AM

:) sweet sweet Lucy... This a thought of a woman that's been tried and tested but still remained fruitful, tough and graceful.. Thanks for this..:) nd am proud to be a woman..:)

Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 6/8/2014 6:03:00 AM

Thank you - me too.

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 4/13/2014 7:29:00 PM

Haha, I love this. Yes, men -never underestimate a woman! Have a great Sunday, Lucilla :)

Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 6/8/2014 6:02:00 AM

Thank you I am late with this one

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 4/9/2014 7:22:00 PM

Lovely tribute to us women Lucilla and I like it very much...Yay women! Hugs

Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 4/9/2014 11:15:00 PM

Thank you Cecilia, I am glad that you like it.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 4/4/2014 10:12:00 PM

I am very grateful !!!!!!!!!!!! :) :)

Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 4/5/2014 2:54:00 AM

I know you are.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/22/2014 1:04:00 AM

this was a sweet tribute for women that you did. Sorry I missed it on Woman's Day!

Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 4/5/2014 2:54:00 AM

Thank you for this nice comment.

Bl Devnath

Date: 3/20/2014 1:04:00 PM

A very nice truth of the world. Without woman no one can be born. Woman are always get the first preference than the man. In our country Goddess are prayed. True women are always be respected. If one does not respect the true women that's the absolute innocence of that being surely, I feel too. Loved your vision here. Loved always, my lovely friend, bl

Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 4/5/2014 2:53:00 AM

Thanks Bi.

Robert Pettit

Date: 3/19/2014 12:04:00 AM

Helen Reddy did not state it as well in her hit song. Decent write.

Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 3/19/2014 6:19:00 PM

Thank you Robert, I will have to listen to it.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/10/2014 8:48:00 AM

- Yes!! - I like it very much, Lucilla :) - I'm only a few days late ... sorry - but better late than never ... Have a lovely day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 3/19/2014 6:22:00 PM

Thanks Anne Lise, I'm glad that you like it.

Richard D Seal

Date: 3/9/2014 7:15:00 PM

Hi Lucy, What you say is true, women have been surprising me all my life, usually with a rolling pin in hand haha, just kidding, Us men are lucky to have you ladies in the world. Take care, Richard

Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 3/19/2014 6:26:00 PM

I use the rolling pin for other things. Men are not all bad - it's just that we pick the wrong ones sometimes.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/9/2014 1:12:00 PM

proud to be a woman and your radiant piece says it all,lucy.. we rock!.. huggs

Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 3/9/2014 1:42:00 PM

Thank you so much. We do - don't we?

Russell Sivey

Date: 3/8/2014 11:54:00 PM

I always put women a higher than myself, as they are really the better sex in my opinion! You name it and I can show that the woman would be better at that situation! It's just an observation that I've seen. Oh there is an exception...most women can't do the strenuous physical labor as well as a man, but other than that the woman is better at anything! And they are certainly better caregivers! They are mothers with their motherly love, can't beat that! What a fabulous write, Great Work!!

Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 3/9/2014 10:06:00 AM

Russell; Thank you very much for such nice comment. I had second thoughts when I wrote this. I didn't want men to get the wrong idea. I don't think that women are better than men. I just think we should be the same.ou are a great person. God bless you always...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/8/2014 9:43:00 PM

hey, thanks for remembering your sisters on woman's day!! NIce one.

Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 3/9/2014 10:19:00 AM

Good morning Andrea; Thanks for liking this poem. Us women play a big part in this world of men...

Paul Callus

Date: 3/8/2014 4:20:00 PM

Hope you won't mind me butting in where women tread...but may I too pay tribute to all women. In the meantime, never underestimate a man! :) :)

Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 3/8/2014 5:06:00 PM

Thanks Paul and I don't mind. I have seen a lot of women suffer a lot in life and I'm sure it goes for men too. I myself would never underestimate anyone, but it happens more to women.

Jan Allison

Date: 3/8/2014 4:05:00 PM

fabulous tribute on this special day. loved this acrostic. Jan x

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 3/8/2014 2:40:00 PM

succulent and clever write Lucilla well penned hugs

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 3/8/2014 2:28:00 PM

Beautiful Lucilla. I did like this a lot.. Read Strength Empowered! by yours truly and let me know what you think... :)s Verlena