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Where I come from
Women are morale formed
Symbol of sanity
In a world of insanity
Mother Nature in personified
Mother to old and young alike
Better half of a man 
A man ages above her
To be better, she is submissive
Submission, made possible by respect
Through the ages gaps the respect becomes natural

To love a man ages younger is unnatural
Therefore unwomanly, though women are blameless
Blinded by the illusion of sexual expressionism
And freedom which is not needed
With the presumed weakness, comes the strength
The strength that is fast eluding us

You don’t have to be men women
Because we men are jealous of women
For they always stoop to conquer
Who ever said age is just a number lied
Age substitutes wisdom and experience
Nature made it so and nature is woman

Offor Ujunwa
on the contest- Cougar Effect

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  1. Date: 3/14/2014 6:29:00 AM
    CONGRATS on this win, Offor. Very nice poem!

    ujunwa Avatar offor ujunwa
    Date: 3/16/2014 11:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks michael
  1. Date: 7/15/2011 2:19:00 AM
    Congrats on your well deserved win.*cheers*

  1. Date: 7/5/2011 4:35:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win Offor in Dr. Ram Mehta's "Cougar Effect" contest. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/4/2011 12:12:00 PM
    INteresting perspective. however, I don't think it is actually about sex when some older women go after a younger man. Some old men just don't get a woman of any age! Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 7/3/2011 5:42:00 AM
    Offor congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's contest ;-)

  1. Date: 7/2/2011 6:37:00 PM
    congrats offor on your wonderful win in cougar contest luv.. enjoy a great win for excellent poetry ..

  1. Date: 7/2/2011 4:54:00 PM
    Nice take on the theme with the background conservative, Offor, congratulations

  1. Date: 6/23/2011 7:53:00 AM
    Excellent entry, Offor. Welcome to PS. Great write. Good luck. Thanks for your comments on my recent postings. Have a great weekend. Ralph

  1. Date: 6/21/2011 12:16:00 PM

  1. Date: 6/21/2011 12:15:00 PM
    Wonderful poem, very Wonderful! Keep them comming, Offor, Keep them comming. Good Blessings for GOD! Thank You for commenting on, "Women Of Extinction...Many Blessings, Today!!! Love You!!!

  1. Date: 6/20/2011 6:26:00 AM
    Women are a great story to write about andd you tell the story well. Enjoyed!