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Where I come from Women are morale formed Symbol of sanity In a world of insanity Mother Nature in personified Mother to old and young alike Better half of a man A man ages above her To be better, she is submissive Submission, made possible by respect Through the ages gaps the respect becomes natural To love a man ages younger is unnatural Therefore unwomanly, though women are blameless Blinded by the illusion of sexual expressionism And freedom which is not needed With the presumed weakness, comes the strength The strength that is fast eluding us You don’t have to be men women Because we men are jealous of women For they always stoop to conquer Who ever said age is just a number lied Age substitutes wisdom and experience Nature made it so and nature is woman Offor Ujunwa on the contest- Cougar Effect

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Date: 1/12/2016 12:42:00 PM
Powerful poem, Offor, enjoyed..................... SKAT
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Date: 3/14/2014 6:29:00 AM
CONGRATS on this win, Offor. Very nice poem!
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Date: 3/16/2014 11:18:00 AM
Thanks michael
Date: 7/15/2011 2:19:00 AM
Congrats on your well deserved win.*cheers*
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Date: 7/5/2011 4:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Offor in Dr. Ram Mehta's "Cougar Effect" contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/4/2011 12:12:00 PM
INteresting perspective. however, I don't think it is actually about sex when some older women go after a younger man. Some old men just don't get a woman of any age! Congrats on your win.
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Date: 7/3/2011 5:42:00 AM
Offor congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's contest ;-)
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Date: 7/2/2011 6:37:00 PM
congrats offor on your wonderful win in cougar contest luv.. enjoy a great win for excellent poetry ..
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Date: 7/2/2011 4:54:00 PM
Nice take on the theme with the background conservative, Offor, congratulations
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Date: 6/23/2011 7:53:00 AM
Excellent entry, Offor. Welcome to PS. Great write. Good luck. Thanks for your comments on my recent postings. Have a great weekend. Ralph
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Date: 6/21/2011 12:16:00 PM
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Date: 6/21/2011 12:15:00 PM
Wonderful poem, very Wonderful! Keep them comming, Offor, Keep them comming. Good Blessings for GOD! Thank You for commenting on, "Women Of Extinction...Many Blessings, Today!!! Love You!!!
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Date: 6/20/2011 6:26:00 AM
Women are a great story to write about andd you tell the story well. Enjoyed!
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