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Woman To Woman

That day I came running I had planned to tell you my African name So you could pronounce it wrong, so I could give you an attitude I was looking hard for reasons to hate you, I was trying hard to make you hate me But then you came to open the door I sensed hesitancy You feared, you did not know what to expect You did not know what was standing on the other side of the door Then the door opened softly, you had that warm smile We introduced each other Your demeanor calmed me, I ended up wearing my best behavior We talked about the kids Did not say much after that, then I left The father of my kids, the love of your life I like the way you talk about him I admire how you cook for him I love the way you carry yourself I admire the way you've made him to be A changed man, a happy man A responsible man, a caring man We never had that

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Date: 7/18/2015 10:59:00 AM
A great poem. Much wisdom therein contained and a true pleasure to read. A7
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 9/15/2015 10:27:00 AM
Thank u Robert. God bless
Date: 7/18/2015 10:14:00 AM
Njeri, this is a written piece. If meeting an old flame's new partner turned out like this it be amazing:-)Alexis
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 9/15/2015 10:26:00 AM
Yes it did. Thank you Alexis
Date: 7/17/2015 11:44:00 PM
Njeri, this poem is so so so heartwarming and full of compassion and love, the world needs more of you !!!!!!
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 9/15/2015 10:25:00 AM
Oh... thank you Arthur
Date: 7/17/2015 5:52:00 PM
wow I can only imagine the emotions somone feels meeting a previous partner's new flame - great descriptive write Njeri:-) hugs jan xx7
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 9/15/2015 10:24:00 AM
Thank you Jan

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