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Woman of My Dreams

Her smile gave the attraction i went without any calculation and gave her an explanation that her sight gave me the admiration i told her she was my destination my every imagination i needed no demostration to prove my affection after along conversation she gave me her expectation and asked my intention because she expected no separation she gave me no limitation because she had accepted my application in her heart i was in the first position and her every sensation

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Date: 8/3/2016 1:06:00 AM
Shem, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**
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Shem Wamani
Date: 8/8/2016 4:08:00 AM
wow thats amazing....we can share our poems to each other... i want to be your poet friend tooo skat
Date: 8/2/2016 3:11:00 PM
She sounds wonderful Shem - welcome to poetry soup:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/2/2016 1:13:00 PM
Shem W.,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Shem Wamani
Date: 8/8/2016 4:10:00 AM
thanks linda....thank you for being my poetry friend

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