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Woman of my dreams

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Woman of my dreams

I used to know him very well Bestfriends we used to be, almost as one He would inspire to write and create feelings in verse Passion would erupt from within my very soul He taught me of love and how to love That love has no color nor image It's not how he looks like but how he makes you feel that matters His rhymes, his words of love made me believe that maybe I too was a Romeo And I fell, she is beautiful beyond my understanding Her hair smells like flowers that are yet to be discovered A smile fit for an angel Her body, i cant explain but I freeze when she nears me and I stutter He tells me she is for me, and I want to believe him Yet I feel she is way out of my reach Again he shows me the power of love and I smile Who would have thought that I was a poet He tells me who he is and that he is me Yes I speak of my heart, I want to believe him I fall for her ever deeper and she begins to walk out of my life But he damn he tells me to keep trying why wont my heart give up When i hold her nothing else matters, I love her

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  1. Date: 6/16/2013 6:04:00 PM
    This was very lovely, Edward. Very warm and romantic. Nice write! Love Holly:)

    Orozco Avatar Edward Orozco
    Date: 8/28/2014 10:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Holly =)
  1. Date: 6/14/2013 10:16:00 AM
    beautiful, truly thoroughly enjoyed this :) lovely

    Orozco Avatar Edward Orozco
    Date: 6/14/2013 2:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you :)
  1. Date: 6/9/2013 12:26:00 AM
    damn romantic.. loved it.. -Nishita (nishu)

    Orozco Avatar Edward Orozco
    Date: 6/14/2013 2:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you :D
  1. Date: 9/11/2012 12:12:00 AM
    ah..very romantic verse...wonderful write...thanks for sharing your nice work :) luv SK

  1. Date: 11/15/2011 9:19:00 AM
    Beautiful romantic verse Edward, a sadness in the lines I feel. Thank you for your visit and sweet comment.

    Orozco Avatar Edward Orozco
    Date: 6/14/2013 2:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you :}