Woman

Fragile like dew drop Though I dream, dare, fight and win Yes! I am woman.

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Date: 10/17/2016 12:15:00 PM

Hi Divya: A great haiku tribute to women as I have three daughters. Great Write!

Divya Jaiswal
Date: 10/17/2016 12:26:00 PM

Thanks a lot Ralph for your kind word, I had a look on your poems and they are great.

Date: 9/27/2016 3:36:00 AM

That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Divya. :)

Divya Jaiswal
Date: 9/27/2016 8:22:00 AM

Thanks for your nice words Moon Flower!

Date: 9/22/2016 5:03:00 AM

Good poem but the declaration of the last line might be stronger as "Yes! I am woman" or maybe not.

Divya Jaiswal
Date: 9/24/2016 1:45:00 AM

Thanks for feedback Keith! This is my first haiku, just trying to get hang of it. I have edited it to make stronger.