Woman

Woman World's most beautiful creature A vision of poetry in motion An apotheosis in satin and lace The ultimate in love and devotion Woman A masterpiece of charm and guile Perfection to the nth degree Few words can describe this beauty A quintessence of love is she Woman Primordial reaction is one of awe When viewing this creature divine The essence of love is all around her On the very edge of sublime Woman Carnal attraction between the sexes Can only describe this bliss The final union of body and soul As we tumble into the abyss © Jack Ellison 2014

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Toquyen Harrell

Date: 8/23/2014 2:30:00 PM

Short, we are so much more haha. Enjoyed Jack. You got that right :)

Toquyen Harrell
Date: 8/24/2014 7:52:00 AM

Lol. You will be rewarded. Seek and you shall find haha

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/24/2014 6:59:00 AM

Whatever it is, I can't get enough of it!!!! LOL Loving hugs, Romeo XOXOX

Carol Eastman

Date: 8/23/2014 10:11:00 AM

Dragon tumbled into an abyss once. We followed and ended up at the center of the earth. It was great until the Trolls taught everyone to gamble. Dumb Trolls! Now we're not welcome at the ocean AND the center of the earth! Dragon giving the leader a hot foot didn't help either. Honestly! They're Dumb and Dumber! This weeks school lesson is going to be how to NOT offend your host when visiting. Unfortunately, I don't think it'll work. The Trolls cleaned their toenails during the 1st lesson. Sigh!

Carol Eastman
Date: 8/23/2014 12:48:00 PM

I'm saving them... But if newpapers are gone... Then comics won't be seen... I would imagine a comic is where they belong? And with tremers I'll never be able to do the art work... But it is a good dream...

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/23/2014 10:20:00 AM

You ARE saving all these, RIGHT!!! In book form they would be a best seller! XOX

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/23/2014 8:39:00 AM

You are sizzling today, Kenny! WOW!!! Love it! Hugs

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/23/2014 9:05:00 AM

HOT Hot Hot!!! Sizzling! Loving hugs, Kenneth XOX

Jan Allison

Date: 8/23/2014 8:26:00 AM

ohhh sensual and passionate write my dear brother Jack. loves you loads my friend:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/23/2014 9:06:00 AM

That's me... sensual and passionate!!! LOL Love ya Jan XOXOX