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Wolf's Fall

The forest glowed green around me, Brimming with life as far as the eye could see. But I did not see the forest, I was hearing, in my ears, my heartbeat’s chorus. It was all I could do to stay on my feet, Because of the water’s slippery sheet. Carefully I place one foot in front of the other, My courage builds, as gracefully I complete one step after another. Finally I begin to believe that I am better than the cold, dark water, I believed my will alone, had broken that of the water. For I had conquered the wild and untamed torrent, But with this thought, it was as though I were signing my death warrant. My courage caused my paw to move just a little too far, And the log then became treacherous, as many are. I fell from the timber slowly, The river causing me to feel lowly. I feel myself falling, That frigid murk calling. I entered the water in an electric shock, My life flashed before me, as though I had turned back the clock. I aged many years in that moment, It was nature's way of leaving me a comment. Respect your place in this world, Or one day you may wake up with life’s wings furled.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/11/2014 4:16:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Isaac :) - I choose your first good written poem - hope you will write many poem in the future- Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/11/2014 12:01:00 AM
Hi Isaac, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your way of writing. But, for the mean time, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 3/10/2014 11:20:00 PM
Isaac, a lovely message. , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and offer positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to my contest and poetry page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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