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Wolfish Love

the full moon is bright shows him her face as he nears he’s getting hairy his heart leaps at her beauty he’s still hungry and eats her

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/14/2011 7:32:00 PM
But!!! was the wolf a man? Maybe she didn't mind if it was. I'd like to think so. Can I have it my way?
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Date: 10/10/2011 6:43:00 PM
well a different ending than the story Jack but he is a wolf when Moon is full but cursed until the morning light.. too late by then.. yum..luv..good luck in the contest..
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Date: 10/10/2011 12:29:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this one..I would not want a date with him..I would have never thought about writing one like this ...Thanks for stopping by, reading and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 10/9/2011 10:43:00 PM
I was expecting this to be a love story lol I like the sharp turn you took here made me laugh.....ummm you should make a limerick response to the "super duper discounts" poem, I will add it to mine and judy's, get someone else, and we got us a collaboration!
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Date: 10/9/2011 6:05:00 PM
Ah, the happy ending. There's no mention how she felt about him as their two bodies 'join up.'
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Date: 10/9/2011 4:45:00 PM
It was probably her own fault for tasting so good. Ouch, my wife just smacked me.
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Date: 10/9/2011 3:39:00 PM
Bummer he ate her...Oh well! Nice write Jack!!
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Date: 10/9/2011 3:04:00 PM
dang, whadda lout! nice write jack~N
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