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Wolf and Owl Take Shape

Wolf And Owl Take Shape Smoke and red cinders rise together in retrograde simplicity On counter rotation, winds sing through birch and oak Marbled moon remains sour yellow through the ecliptic edge Cryptic night, where owl and wolf find warmth and cover Nestled in the coarse blanket warn by Tabitha, the young one Her tribe sleeps through winter She holds them in her mystic spell, mild heart and smile They breathe cold mist together in history hallows Unfolding cold reveals their open eyes Reaching out into the distance as wolf howls Unknown mysteries of life feel their kinship Heaven opens up to them crisp on the fire light Wolf moves his wool but only slightly in a twitch Owl takes flight, returns alarmed Back to the blanket and young girls arms It rests with comfort feathers by her heart Wolf and owl take shape, Tabitha smiles They all take one long last breath and hold it in Wait till spring to release it again below the mystic stars 10/17/14 Free Verse, Prose Poetry, haibun – Poetry Contest

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Date: 11/7/2014 3:49:00 PM
I'm glad we are sharing a spot here Earl. Congratulations on your win, I knew this was great!
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Date: 11/7/2014 4:08:00 PM
Hi Brenda, Thank you so much again for commenting. Congratulations to you too on your great entry and well deserved win in this contest. You should have ranked higher in my estimation. Have a great day. Earl
Date: 11/7/2014 2:48:00 PM
Beautiful, Earl! Reads like a dream...congrats on your win...love and blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 11/7/2014 4:24:00 PM
Hi Rhonda, Thank you so much for your kind words. I truly appreciate it. Congratulations to you too for your beautiful entry and well deserved win in the contest. I wish you had received a higher placement. From what I have read and from what I can surmise, you won, as in> (1) the contest in my estimation. Have a pleasant evening. Take care. Earl
Date: 11/6/2014 5:47:00 PM
Actually Earl I faved it.
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Date: 11/6/2014 5:59:00 PM
Thank you. I appreciate it. Take it easy. Earl
Date: 11/6/2014 5:23:00 PM
I love it Earl. I am glad you liked it too because it is fabulous. I had no problems with the read. Congratulations on your win, you did good!
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Date: 11/6/2014 5:42:00 PM
Hi Maurice, Thank you so much for your encouragement. I am surprised that I made it to the top 10 realm. I actually do consider my audience. Like you, coming from the entertainment, theater industry, I too like to entertain my readers. I'm glad that I can accomplish that from time to time. Thanks again. Have a great night. Earl
Date: 10/17/2014 9:51:00 AM
Sounds so magical Earl. Very well written, I hope it does well for you. GL
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Date: 10/17/2014 12:00:00 PM
Hi Brenda, I tried to paint a simple picture here. Sometimes words get in the way though. This one might be a little over the top, over the edge, for our readers, but I like it. I'm glad you liked it. Thank you so much for your support and kind words. Take care. Earl

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