Wolf

Wind rustles her cover whining of pups distract wafting scent entices weariness piques her need weakness seduces her wiliness picks her prey wantonness her attack ©3/15/2022 In Search Of Prey Poetry Contest Sponsor = Joseph May

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/1/2022 10:38:00 AM

Congratulations on this win. Today, be blessed with your win. Have a great weekend...........

Terry Miller

Date: 3/31/2022 3:18:00 AM

Great description, very well written, congratulations.

Eve Roper

Date: 3/30/2022 8:53:00 PM

Great description of the wolf, ,John, congratulations on your win in Joseph contest. blessings my friend

Christuraj Alex

Date: 3/30/2022 7:20:00 PM

Nature of wolf very beautifully portrayed. Congratulations!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/30/2022 3:00:00 PM

i like the interesting way you started each line mostly using noun subjects followed by action verbs. Congrats on your win, John.

Joseph May

Date: 3/30/2022 2:17:00 PM

Very nicely penned John, Congrats on your win

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 3/16/2022 7:48:00 PM

Hello John ... hunger is a powerful weapon - well done John - Lindsay

John Lawless
Date: 3/17/2022 5:08:00 AM

Hey Lindsay, thanks for the visit. ...and with the whining of hungry offspring.....it becomes a driving force.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/16/2022 7:29:00 PM

Recognized my life partner right away, John. ~ Wershon Golf

John Lawless
Date: 3/17/2022 5:08:00 AM

a metaphoric expose that I wasn't aware I was writing....

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 3/16/2022 11:28:00 AM

This is creatively done, gl in the contest, John

John Lawless
Date: 3/17/2022 5:09:00 AM

Thanks for stopping by Rose, i had some fun writing for this contest...