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Woke Up Dead

A strange thing just happened, I woke up dead Was winging my way to the promised land just ahead Angels were singing To my jammies, I was clinging Then the alarm went off and I jumped out of bed © Jack Ellison 2016

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Carol Eastman

Date: 2/8/2016 10:23:00 AM

Gotta quit mixing them pickles, and hot peppers before bed time! LOL... Bye the bye... We're glad you made it back. After all... With you gone... What would I do when I had a Jack Attack!

Jack Ellison
Date: 2/8/2016 10:31:00 AM

Huh! Didn't go anywhere!!! Still here with my crazies... lol Hugs, Jacko xox

Tim Smith

Date: 2/5/2016 1:33:00 PM

You were floating along in the breeze....not hurried with greatest of ease....saw a bright light....thought it just might....so you swooped down and prayed on your knees

Jack Ellison
Date: 2/5/2016 1:36:00 PM

"swooped down and prayed on your knees"... it worked cause here I am!!!!

Judy Konos

Date: 2/5/2016 7:27:00 AM

Jack...You miss me? You seldom ever come over to soup...I writ a perm to the Soupers but you don't see it cause you're too busy waking up dead someplace where you don't belong...Savvy?

Jack Ellison
Date: 2/5/2016 7:41:00 AM

I have been severely reprimanded!!! My sincere apologies... bad man! LOVE to you Miss Judy!!! xxx

Judy Konos

Date: 2/5/2016 7:16:00 AM

AMEN!

Jack Ellison
Date: 2/5/2016 7:20:00 AM

PHEWWWW! I've missed you... love you sweet Judy!!! xxx