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Without You One Liner Contest

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You broke my heart left it in tatters, now you’re gone nothing else matters. One of my favourite songs – Without You By Harry Nilsson Contest: Sponsor: Silent One 12~13~15

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Vladislav Raven

Date: 1/10/2016 7:25:00 PM

What does one say Jan, you have knocked the nail write on the head with this one. One line, you know me, takes me twenty lines just to say hello. Know way i could do one line. Much belated congrats Jan. Hugs....Vladislav.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/11/2016 1:45:00 AM

Thanks Mike:-) hugs Jan xx

Grace Mutindi

Date: 12/16/2015 4:40:00 AM

Hi Jan, congrats on your big win!

Jan Allison
Date: 12/17/2015 1:00:00 AM

Thanks Grace:-) Hugs Jan xx

Rahy Hy

Date: 12/15/2015 7:23:00 AM

Congrats on the great win Jan... love, Rahy

Jan Allison
Date: 12/15/2015 7:38:00 AM

thanks Rahy:-) hugs Jan xx

Skat A

Date: 12/14/2015 10:46:00 PM

Jan, Congratulations on your One Liner #7 win. **SKAT**

Jan Allison
Date: 12/15/2015 1:05:00 AM

Thanks so much Skat:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 12/14/2015 5:52:00 PM

An excellent one liner, Jan; it also boasts of internal rhyme! ~ Congratulations on a most worthy win. Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 12/15/2015 1:04:00 AM

Thanks so much Paul:-) hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso

Date: 12/14/2015 1:06:00 AM

Liked this one!

Jan Allison
Date: 12/14/2015 1:24:00 AM

Cheers me dear:-) hugs Jan xx

Dan Cwiak

Date: 12/13/2015 11:08:00 PM

Nicely done, Jan. I like the rhymes, too! Kudos on the win.

Jan Allison
Date: 12/14/2015 1:24:00 AM

Thanks Dan:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/13/2015 7:02:00 PM

wonderful, Jan!!a well deserved win, and this is a favorite song of mine as well. did you ever hear the original version from like the '80's?

Jan Allison
Date: 12/14/2015 1:24:00 AM

Thanks Andrea - I thought this was the original version by Nilsson will have to check it out now:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight

Date: 12/13/2015 6:37:00 PM

Very nice, Jan, and it rhymes too! Congrats on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison
Date: 12/14/2015 1:23:00 AM

Thanks Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx

John Lawless

Date: 12/13/2015 5:15:00 PM

...and with a rhyme to boot.....good job

Jan Allison
Date: 12/13/2015 5:17:00 PM

Thanks John I really enjoyed this contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 12/13/2015 5:06:00 PM

Congratulations of the placement of the contest Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 12/13/2015 5:11:00 PM

Thanks Nayda:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 12/13/2015 4:34:00 PM

Congrats on a great win Jan..

Jan Allison
Date: 12/13/2015 4:55:00 PM

Thanks Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx

David Mohn

Date: 12/13/2015 3:25:00 PM

congrats Jan...this is sadly wonderful!

Jan Allison
Date: 12/13/2015 3:28:00 PM

Thanks David it is a truly beautiful song .. unless Mariah Carey sings it! Hugs Jan xx

David Fisher

Date: 12/13/2015 3:11:00 PM

Well done, Jan! Love your one liner.

Jan Allison
Date: 12/13/2015 3:14:00 PM

Thanks David:-) hugs Jan xx

John Hamilton

Date: 12/13/2015 1:57:00 PM

Great song Jan lots of memories with this one, nice rhyme.

Jan Allison
Date: 12/13/2015 2:03:00 PM

Thanks John:-) hugs Jan xx

Eric Boddie

Date: 12/13/2015 12:17:00 PM

when the heart is broken....no word nor token....can bring comfort or end the stress....because only time can heal the emotional mess....Love it jan....;)

Jan Allison
Date: 12/13/2015 12:24:00 PM

Thanks Eric I always love your rhyming comments:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 12/13/2015 12:15:00 PM

Great song and poem Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 12/13/2015 12:24:00 PM

Thanks Tim it is an awesome epic song:-) hugs Jan xx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 12/13/2015 9:42:00 AM

Sad but poignant. A Fav!

Jan Allison
Date: 12/13/2015 11:49:00 AM

I have many favourite tracks Armand but this one is a wonderful lyric - sadly the song was 'ruined' by Mariah Carey... you can't beat the original:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/13/2015 8:48:00 AM

Jan, you have penned a good one liner. It compliments the song perfectly. Nice rhyme as well. Good job! Best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

Jan Allison
Date: 12/13/2015 11:48:00 AM

Thanks Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx