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Without You I Am Nothing

All around the trees are swaying and shaking, But I can’t feel the cold I know I should. The wind is howling and screaming, But I cannot hear it at all. The snow is falling in a fast and furious blizzard. A sheet of white masks the mountains I know are there. The smell of snow; crisp, clean and fresh, I cannot smell it ... and I miss it. I can sense your presence and want to seek you out. You reach me and I freeze, Panic floods through me. If I cannot feel everything I should, Can I feel you? Will I ever feel your warmth? Will I ever hear you golden voice again? Will I ever feel another of your tender kisses? Will I ever see your perfect features again? I can feel a warm hand on my shoulder, I turn in shock to see you standing tall and proud in front of me. I hadn’t noticed the tears I was crying until I could taste them in my mouth, I can see your face and features, as perfect as I remember them. You embrace me in the most adoring hug holding me close, I instantly feel your warmth spread through me like a blaze. I can hear your gentile, caring whispers in my ear, I can smell your familiar sweet scent. You bring my scenes alive in my time of numbness, You could bring me out of the deepest and darkest of comas, You could stop me from falling into despair. I need you my love, Without you I am still and silent, Without you I am numb, Without you I am nothing.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/1/2010 10:09:00 PM
~ Love You shall forever hold ~ "Much Love & Warmth to You Always," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very Beautiful Tomorrow," Bye Dear!:) ~
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Date: 8/1/2010 10:08:00 PM
~ I did the only thing I could and stepped to the side but, the pain is definitely going to be around for a bit yet, I know that "God" will heal my heart in time and, I love her so much that its Her Heart that I care for the most ~ Smile, so You see dear, I can most surely relate to Your Beautiful but bittersweet poem here and, I hope and pray for Your Heart that, Your Dreams shall blosom into A Beautiful Rose for You and ~ ....Cont:)
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Date: 8/1/2010 9:59:00 PM
Smile ~ Hello Dear Hazel Jackson ~ This is such a very deep and beautiful poem of heart and soul! I was just skimming though Soup this evening and I saw Your title and decided to read for, I too have strong feelings within my heart for a very beautiful lady which, caused myself to relate to Your titles words! My heart was profoundly broke today because, She has Always lived so very deeply within my heart but, I could not stand in her way so ~ ....Cont:)
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