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Without You

This pain I feel inside I doubt it will ever subside It feels as though I’m dying But my smile is forever lying How do I face today without you I feel like my soul has been ripped in two Starting and ending my day without you Is something I can’t begin to do Almost half my life I have been by your side You are my twin soul, the one from which I cannot hide Our marriage has been one huge emotional ride All these memories coming at me all at once like a rip tide Our journey has came to an end at last 14 years has flown by way to fast I gave it the best shot I had And yet still, it has ended really bad So now its time to pick up these pieces I call life I’m going to try to put behind me all this anger and strife I have to start all over again without you And the first step is to end this first day without you…..

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/9/2016 11:59:00 PM
Fallen Angel, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 7/4/2015 6:54:00 PM
Fallen Stopped by to say hello, I enjoyed reading your poem today. Take Care **SKAT**
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Date: 2/8/2010 7:42:00 PM
Bless you... -Always Lynette
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Date: 1/26/2010 3:12:00 PM
How tragically sad but your wings will yet again lift through the coming days for God's Angel's are meant to fly. Your friend, Lightwalker
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Date: 1/18/2010 3:42:00 PM
Oh wow. I gotta read this to my daddy. I love it. Him and my mom are, well probably gonna divorce soon...Lifes going to hell again for me, just when i thought it had gotten better. Anyways, nice work, this caught me. Please read and comment my poem titled "Nicks Poem" thank you <3 xo Rain
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Date: 1/16/2010 4:15:00 PM
Sad love loss write. Hope that it is a topic and not your life. Welcome to soup. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 1/10/2010 2:17:00 PM
I pray that God gives you the strength you need to begin anew, Fallen Angel. Peace, Audrey
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Date: 1/10/2010 12:53:00 PM
It takes strength to pick up those pieces and the pain you describe has been felt by many. Perhaps in time you will be able to move forward with hope, but it won't be easy so I'll be sending positive thoughts your way. Keep writing; it's a great way to vent and may help in your recovery. Best Wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 1/10/2010 12:19:00 PM
good work FA.... I would tell this person life becomes incrementally better each poem on their path, I speak from experience... jimbo
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