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Without Thought

Challenges come swiftly While emotions get carried away Far too soon

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Raul Moreno

Date: 3/3/2009 9:19:00 PM

Nice senryu Tyesha, I left you some soup mail...Raul

Date: 2/24/2009 4:46:00 PM

So much truth in this poem. Good message. The consequences of the emotions without though can cause hurt feeling that are often difficult to mend. Insightful poem. Karen

Laurie Ginn

Date: 2/17/2009 12:25:00 AM

Stop and think,,,I always think that after my emotions have taken me where I shouldn't be. I think you've been in my head Ty.

Tyesha Ehigiator

Date: 2/12/2009 10:59:00 PM

I am not sure whether or not it is a Senryu or a Haiku, I have never distinguished between the two before..I am still learning about all the different types of poetry, Thanks for the feedback..God Bless*Tyesha

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 2/12/2009 6:14:00 PM

This is lovely but I think maybe it is a Senryu. Nice job. BG

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 2/11/2009 9:53:00 AM

Yes, this is so true and very clearly and well expressed. Michael

Christopher Higgins

Date: 2/11/2009 9:40:00 AM

Well done with this Haiku..emotions can get carried away based on circumstances..Good work.