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        WITH OUT ME

Life without me, can be very dull.
I can imagine everyone, not so happy.
I Hardly gave anybody bull.

 Only a few people consider  me a fool.
My friends be always thinking, 
I was really cool.
Obeying, and sometimes breaking a rule.
As I got older,
I avoided being Boring or being duel.
Always making the best of things.
Even when someone was being cruel.
I have walked into many lives.
Adding more than a tank of fuel.
Giving a sweet thought of butterflies.
While acting like a mule
I could always make one laugh.
One quality, I would not take back.
Always making friend anywhere.
That is a true proven fact.

If things about me you did not like, or care.
That was okay, Jack.
When my life did not  treat me fair
Even then my sense of humor, lack.
My blanket I would always share
Always thanking those I please.
Without me an empty hole,I would leave.
Without regrets, without me looking back.
If you read this do believe,
Life WITHOUT you can be color black.


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  1. Date: 5/7/2015 5:43:00 PM
    life WITHOUT LOVED ONES is surely painful not for the writer who suffers the bulk but also those left behind. A nice theme with a purpose!

  1. Date: 5/4/2015 3:06:00 PM
    Without doubt, you are right. Great work.

  1. Date: 5/3/2015 3:55:00 AM
    Hey SKAT :) me, aarushi, you can call me ashi:) your are just fab iread your one single poem and you became my favourite poet. I am a very new writer and i am a student of 10th is really good to know that you did like my LET ME FLY keep loving my poems and keep reading it thank you, love u aarushi:)

  1. Date: 1/29/2014 11:36:00 AM
    awesome poem!!

  1. Date: 7/7/2013 12:20:00 AM
    yes! :-)

  1. Date: 10/15/2010 12:08:00 PM

  1. Date: 10/15/2010 10:18:00 AM
    SKAT, SKAT, SKAT. Now I know you I definately cannot live without you. firstly, you are a good friend, you have a sweet personality, and you give me my poetry fix. So I give it to me

  1. Date: 9/29/2010 9:25:00 AM
    I love your fresh pragmatic writes so much ... and this poem just show all why

  1. Date: 4/9/2010 10:38:00 PM
    ur brothers favorite.... the poem says it all abt him & i we miss u dearly...... there is an empty hole in all of our hearts us w/out a sister & our kids w/out their cousins. please we beg of u lets try again...... u have left ur last name in our hearts....(HOLE):(

  1. Date: 3/3/2010 8:17:00 AM
    Part # 2 By the way thank you for your comment and critique on the last poem that I had written,Please have a wonderful day today and keep writing because it allows the inner layers of your heart to shine through, God bless you always, Dean

  1. Date: 3/3/2010 8:16:00 AM
    Part # 1 Irma if you weren't here you would truly be missed by so many people who appreciate you for all that you are and more because people care about you just like I do, and even though I may not know you that well I can tell that you honestly have a beautiful heart and soul Thank you for letting me see through your eyes today because it allowed me to go on a pleasant journey with you. ( To be continued )

  1. Date: 3/1/2010 8:01:00 AM
    This is a good poem. I love the way it flows =] Keep up the great work -Echo

  1. Date: 2/24/2010 1:20:00 PM
    i imagine life would be the the same... loved this poem

  1. Date: 2/24/2010 12:03:00 PM
    I really enjoyed this one. You are Obviously a wise person Iram....Gareth

  1. Date: 2/24/2010 11:01:00 AM
    I enjoyed reading your poetry today Irma. Please keep writing and sharing with us here at PoetrySoup. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/24/2010 7:35:00 AM
    Irma thank you for your welcome comments today.Rgds Brian Some nice rhyme in this one.

  1. Date: 2/23/2010 9:29:00 PM
    A very nice way to get to know more about you. I share many of your qualities, sweet lady! LUv,Andrea

  1. Date: 2/23/2010 7:15:00 PM
    Dear Irma, I like Without Me. I’m sure life would be dull indeed after you leave.:) Thanks for your comment on my Haiku, but I reposted because I posted the wrong version. Love, Amy

  1. Date: 2/23/2010 6:30:00 PM
    Way to go........................keep the spirits up!

  1. Date: 2/23/2010 6:18:00 PM
    Awesome and Amazing Irma.. u have outdone yourself with this one.. such truth in your words my friend.. thankxxx for enjoying my poetry and your special comments.. so warm.. I just posted a new blog on poetry..could u check it out and leave a comment on it too so it can built some interest on Soup.. thankxx my friend..luv.. Linda-Marie..