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Without Love

Look around you see the azure sky the peaceful white clouds the stars shining in the infinite heavens See the love and care of the creator the color the diversity that he conceived from above Be amazed by his perfect love Look again see us waste and destroy our beautiful gift of love sent from above We have raped the land ravaged the trees spoiled the rivers lakes and seas it's like a bad dream it makes me so sad See how some take and take and never give back forgetting their brothers and sisters in need it is such a sad thing to see Without love all is lost the ruin comes at too high a cost My love for life begins to fade everything is so jaded then my sweet love comes and holds me in her arms I feel her love it's like a cool drink in the scorching heat she pours her love on me then I truly can see without love we are all perishing without this to feed

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Don Johnson

Date: 8/14/2011 4:37:00 AM

Without love life is a bore, something you can't ignore, being alone is fun no more, it's enough to make you bilious, sure? great emotive poem mate, on ya cobber.

Jack Ross Jr.
Date: 8/14/2011 5:13:00 AM

Thank you Mate appreciate you kind comments...with love...old Jack

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/11/2011 11:11:00 PM

I am stopping by this evening to thank you for your kind comments while the soup is up and running. I will never get caught up oh well that's life right? Have a wonderful evening Jack Jr. Love, Carol

Jack Ross Jr.
Date: 8/12/2011 6:21:00 PM

Thank you lovely Lady for your kind and gracious comments, much appreciated...with love...old Jack

John Loving Iii

Date: 8/11/2011 8:28:00 PM

hold on as long as you can.

Jack Ross Jr.
Date: 8/12/2011 6:22:00 PM

Thank you Sir John for you kind comments, much appreciated...with love....old Jack

Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 8/11/2011 12:47:00 PM

Well said, Jack. Love is the greatest gift we can receive and also the greatest one we can give. Too many people in this world today love themselves and their possessions, and not a whole lot more! Best wishes, Robert.

Jack Ross Jr.
Date: 8/11/2011 3:18:00 PM

Thank you so much kind sir for you kind comments, much appreciated...with love...old Jack

James Foulk

Date: 8/10/2011 2:55:00 PM

a beautiful and very creative write. You do have a flare for poetry, just keep posting, I enjoy your poetry. thank you for commenting on A Dusty Road Have I Walked.

Jack Ross Jr.
Date: 8/11/2011 12:12:00 PM

Thank you so very much Sir James for your kind comments, much appreciated, I love your poetry always so enjoyable to read....with love...old Jack

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/10/2011 12:40:00 PM

Thank you for posting your excellent poetry that we all may enjoy reading it Jack Jr. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors. Love, Carol

Jack Ross Jr.
Date: 8/10/2011 2:03:00 PM

Thank you so very much lovely Lady for your kind comments, very much appreciated...with love...old Jack

Kash Poet

Date: 8/10/2011 6:36:00 AM

So true jack...enjoyed.

Jack Ross Jr.
Date: 8/10/2011 2:17:00 PM

Thank you so very much for your kind comments, much appreciated lovely Lovely lady...with love....old Jack

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/10/2011 5:03:00 AM

" she pours he love on me.." jack, this is the centerpiece of the poem for me.. beautiful! :) huggs, nette

Jack Ross Jr.
Date: 8/10/2011 2:19:00 PM

Thank you so very much for your gracious and kind comments, much appreciated lovely Lady...yes the pouring of love is such a healing thing....with love....old Jack

Nette Onclaud
Date: 8/10/2011 5:04:00 AM

" she pours the love on me.."

Juanita Warden

Date: 8/10/2011 1:04:00 AM

Fantastic write, it said it all...I wish we could go back sometimes...jo..thanks for you comment on my poem..

Jack Ross Jr.
Date: 8/10/2011 2:22:00 PM

Thank you so much jo for you kind comments, so very much appreciated lovely Lady...with love...old Jack

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/9/2011 11:44:00 PM

The last lines say it all: wihtout love we are all perishing. . .

Jack Ross Jr.
Date: 8/10/2011 12:06:00 AM

Thank you so very much for your kind and generous comments, much appreciated lovely Lady....with love old Jack

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/9/2011 10:22:00 PM

one hundred per cent correct Jack in your assessment of without luv nothing else flows .. I like the visuals here and even though all seems lost and man has destroyed God's Creation.. it will rebuild itself little by little luv..

Jack Ross Jr.
Date: 8/10/2011 12:07:00 AM

Thank you so very much for your kind comments, much appreciated lovely Lady....with love...old Jack

Anthony O. Mitchell Jr.

Date: 8/9/2011 7:59:00 PM

Well-done on speaking your heart in this one here. A real joy to read and very true. Thanks for your commenting on my work too.

Jack Ross Jr.
Date: 8/10/2011 12:09:00 AM

Thank you so much Kind sir Anthony for your kind comments, very much appreciated...with love...old Jack

Date: 8/9/2011 7:52:00 PM

This a beautiful write I enjoyed reading this very much tonight, thank you for your comments. Love Alexa

Jack Ross Jr.
Date: 8/10/2011 12:10:00 AM

Thank you so very much for your kind comments, very much appreciated lovely Lady...with love...old Jack

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/9/2011 7:48:00 PM

What a wonderful write! I believe that love is exactly the way you described it both from us and from 'Him'! Great work!

Jack Ross Jr.
Date: 8/10/2011 12:11:00 AM

Thank you so very much for your gracious and kind comments, much appreciated....with love...old Jack

James Peranteau

Date: 8/9/2011 6:04:00 PM

What a wonderful write dear poet, the true passion of a poet who exspels thought for the enjoyment of the reader ! Awesome Sir ! Have a wonderful week my friend ! Much love, james

Jack Ross Jr.
Date: 8/10/2011 12:14:00 AM

Thank you so very much Sir James for your kind comments, much appreciated my friend hoping you have a blessed week...with love..old Jack

Steven Cooke

Date: 8/9/2011 3:42:00 PM

you have the true heart of a poet, wonderful write, love it .

Jack Ross Jr.
Date: 8/9/2011 5:15:00 PM

Thank you so very much mate for your kind comments, much appreciated...with love....old Jack