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i close my eyes to see you i close my eyes, the world suddenly is leaving entirely is leaving, of its own accord, is leaving, is falling like an eyelid, tired on the keys of a piano, the stillness of the morning covers us, white white, bleached by the winter, waiting for the pious sound, waiting for the snowdrops to bloom

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Date: 1/29/2023 1:15:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this thoughtful and multi-faceted poem. I have read and re-read it and new meanings and interpretations emerge each time. I love it.
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Maria Mitea
Date: 2/1/2023 4:41:00 PM
Hi Peter, I am glad you found the poem interesting! It makes me happy and motivates me to write! I deeply appreciate it! Blessings!

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