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Without a Word

You wandered in the still of night, slipping quietly through a sacred light. No more burdens or pain to bear, free at last, from sorrow and despair. You live amongst the sun, the moon, and stars; I feel your tender touch, even from afar. May 23, 2022 For: Bite Size form #44 Sponsored by: Line Gauthier Placed 1st in contest

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Line Gauthier

Date: 11/10/2022 3:28:00 PM

Wow ~ beautiful, Paulette. Congrats on your well deserved top finish ~

Robert Lindley

Date: 6/7/2022 7:43:00 AM

My friend, a truly wonderful and uplifting piece to have read. Yes, in the Heavens in the stars those we have lost are. And watching us from afar! A fav-a beautiful gift given this too often sad and dark world in magnificent verse. God bless.

Bill Baker

Date: 5/31/2022 9:49:00 AM

Congratulations on the win, Paulette. Your soulful poem was well- deserving of the win. Hugs, Bill

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 6/1/2022 5:34:00 AM

Thank you for stopping by to comment~your comments always inspire my. :)Paulette

Len Gasun

Date: 5/29/2022 6:16:00 AM

A precious gem written by your golden pen my dear friend Paulette. I love it a lot. Such a marvelous touching tribute poem from your loving heart. CONGRATULATIONS on your shining win! Thanks a lot for sharing! God bless you always.

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 5/29/2022 9:25:00 AM

Thank you my friend~you always have such positive comments about my work; glad you felt it is a "precious golden gem". Blessings, Paulette

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/27/2022 9:39:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away....................

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 5/28/2022 7:22:00 AM

Thank you Paula~as always I appreciate your stopping in for a visit. :)Paulette

Christuraj Alex

Date: 5/26/2022 9:12:00 PM

Beautiful tribute. "You live amongst the sun, the moon, and stars" - Great consolation. Congratulations!

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 5/27/2022 8:44:00 AM

Glad you enjoyed it Christuraj~ love your encouraging comments. :)Paulette

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/26/2022 8:47:00 AM

A marvelous tribute to the changing of form from spirit/flesh to merely spirit - our natural state.

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 5/27/2022 8:43:00 AM

Thank you Caren~ the human condition (in all our frailty) we learn to accept and find peace and solace. :)Paulette

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/24/2022 7:22:00 AM

Much to gleam from your poems, always, Paulette. Well done! Best to you.

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 5/27/2022 8:41:00 AM

Thank you Vijay! :)Paulette

Deb M

Date: 5/24/2022 1:42:00 AM

You write beautiful poems from your heart Paulette which touch my heart and this is one of them…..just lovely! Debx

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 5/27/2022 8:40:00 AM

Thank you so much for your lovely comments.... I am glad I am able to touch a place in your heart too. :)Paulette

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/23/2022 12:44:00 PM

WOW, Paulette, that was such a touching little poem. leaving behind this rotting planet and all the pain and misery that it has brought them.

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 5/23/2022 4:09:00 PM

I am happy to know my short couplets of Grief feels as impactful as I had intended. Thanks for stopping by! :)Paulette

Rico Leffanta

Date: 5/23/2022 11:35:00 AM

Silently slipping away is certainly preferable! Aloha!

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 5/23/2022 11:41:00 AM

Agreed! Thanks for stopping by to comment. :)Paulette