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Without a Voice

* I am unable to reveal the thrill or how my pulse climbs up the gilded stairs.... I must hold my words I cannot speak of morning's dawn and rising sun... I am breathless No voice could say enough to describe... as day unfolds gold... ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Inspired by Catie's contest "What the Hex"

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/29/2011 5:35:00 AM

Congratulations Carrie on your win in the "Any Form -Theme" contest sponsored by Brian Strand. Love, Carol

Elaine George

Date: 6/26/2011 3:26:00 PM

BEAUTIFUL! Carrie. Many congrats on your first place win. Lainie

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 6/26/2011 11:11:00 AM

Without a voice....but with a great talent...Wonderful Diminished Hexaverse you created here, dear Carrie. Thank you for your nice comment. Love, iolanda

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/26/2011 7:34:00 AM

Congrats Carrie on your first place win in Brian's contest ..another lovely poem..luv..

Kim Hilliker

Date: 2/12/2010 1:06:00 PM

Great write. Good luck in the contest.

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/12/2010 10:28:00 AM

A definite winner, Carrie! Good luck in Catie's "What the Hex" Contest! Peace,love, Audrey

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/12/2010 7:59:00 AM

Carrie, I think you stand a great chance of wining first place with this one here. Excellent writing. LUv, andrea

Marty Owens

Date: 2/11/2010 6:49:00 PM

Beautiful poem Carrie...Enjoyed...Marty

John Zoller

Date: 2/11/2010 6:15:00 PM

Wow, dimished hexaverse. Thanks for teaching me something new with a really good poem

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/11/2010 5:00:00 PM

Beautiful Diminished Hexaverse. I can see the dawn and hear the solitude. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara