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Without a Parting Kiss

Running with the van of death, till her legs couldn't defeat the wheels Lonely road in awful calmth, not a shoulder for cry and share Covid hit her love went far, without even a parting kiss.

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John Castellenas

Date: 9/7/2020 1:26:00 AM

A powerful write. You made the reader feel and understand the sadness in the words. A amazing poem.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 9/7/2020 9:53:00 PM

Thank you John for your kind words..

Aditi Mishra

Date: 5/27/2020 2:13:00 PM

This is such a sad emotional write Jenish. You do wonders with words especially in Sijo form.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/28/2020 1:06:00 AM

Thank you Aditi for your wonderful support..

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 5/25/2020 3:09:00 AM

To leave this world without a kiss Dear God, There is something very wrong with this ...

Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/25/2020 3:13:00 AM

Yes.. True..

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 5/24/2020 10:25:00 PM

So sad, to lose a loved one without being able to kiss or speak words of love to them in their last few minutes of their life on Earth. Beautifully expressed Jenish ...

Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/25/2020 12:22:00 AM

Thank you Shirley..Did we poets, ever imagined a world like this?Oh human, into the grave you go without even a parting kiss..

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/24/2020 11:21:00 AM

A searing image you've created, Jenish. May these times eventually be forgotten. Cheers, Gershon

Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/25/2020 12:19:00 AM

May it be forgotten soon..Thank you Gershon..