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Within the Wind

My love, thy beauty rest within the wind, Alive of art, alluring with appeal. As for the wind shall move and blow and bend, Silent you sit inside motion surreal. I see the sea and sometimes she is calm, Aloft the streams of salt aquatic blue. Yet waves do rage when wind brushes her palm, Angered and moved...of time shall tame the shrew. Placid inside the pedestal of air, That blows from leaf to grass and sand to lake, Divine you dare to be a portrait fair, And I in awe amazed each day I wake. If wind is air, each breath is of you dear, Making my world within settle and clear. July 17, 2014

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Date: 2/5/2022 7:28:00 AM
Beautiful flow to this … I love so many lines … silent you sit inside motion surreal and if wind is air, each breath of you is dear . I could see it spoken out loud on stage ! Belated congratulations on your win ! Happy to find you Johnny ! Susan :)
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Johnny Sumler
Date: 2/5/2022 4:49:00 PM
Thank you for the read Susan. Your thoughts are truly touching. This write was around the time of my exit from the Soup. Been away a long time. Maybe I'll put all my Sonnets together into a play.
Date: 9/4/2014 2:48:00 PM
Very beautiful poem Johnny. Congratulations
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Date: 9/3/2014 10:55:00 PM
great win... Linda
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Date: 9/3/2014 6:03:00 PM
a beautifully penned sonnet many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan x
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Date: 9/3/2014 9:50:00 AM
Beautiful write with exquisite imagery! Congratulations on a well-deserved wonderful win! Pandita
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Date: 7/18/2014 1:20:00 AM
I love that one line: If wind is air, each breath is of you, dear. So romantic This poem has that Shakespeare feeling!!
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