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Within the Ripping Soul

Within A ripping Soul A feeling of loss in lore Amidst the web of the whirling wind On the eyes of the earth Amidst the whirling wave On the eyes of the seas A soul emerging to grab The edges of the complex world It is growing and living in To capture its entirety The more it attempts The more complex the word seems That the ripping soul seems lost Amidst thought about the whiling wind Of the world

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/12/2016 12:05:00 PM
Sulyma, I do hope to see you back this year. 2016
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Date: 12/7/2012 12:38:00 PM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this afternoon Sulyman. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/4/2012 1:13:00 PM
Sulyman, , stopping by 2 welcome U into the soup. First I will start by reading your verse. a deep look that took my breath away. Good verse if you ask me. Wishing you the best success with your poetry. ~SKAT~
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