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Forest birds with lovely melodies are calling, green lush leaves embrace my soul and I am falling. Holding hands with father is a sweet memory, in the D E E P depths- I love to lay in reverie. Just me in the stillness among vines entangled, kept prisoner until I wish to be u n t a n g l e d. L a y down with me and I will heal your broken heart, my spirit is here- of the forest, I am part. Now be quiet and you can hear the forest breathing, on the mossy ground flowers and vines are creeping. Place your hand in mine- oh no need to be afraid, QUIET, do not struggle just let the leaves cascade. Roam with me along the banks of a RIPPLING stream, sit with me under a w e e p i n g willow and dream. TILL night is day- oh sweet visitor stay with me, under the vines, a decaying headstone COME and see. ________________________ September 3, 2016 Poetry/Couplets/Within The Green Copyright Protected, ID 16-825-553-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Alphabet Soup sponsor, Kim Merryman Second Place

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Date: 9/16/2016 2:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your deserving second placement Constance with this amazing entry! 7 ; )
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Date: 9/16/2016 12:16:00 PM
Constance, this is a beautiful write with a touch of mystery! Elegantly written! Congrats on your 2nd place win in my alphabet soup contest! Blessings!
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Date: 9/5/2016 9:56:00 AM
Hi BW, This is a good entry for the contest. It is so well written. Your descriptions and imagery is amazing. I wish you the best of in the contest. A Big seven:-) Alexis
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Date: 9/4/2016 12:19:00 PM
Wow! Such heady work!
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Date: 9/4/2016 3:56:00 AM
Oh Kim is going to love this beauty Constance. I sure do! Outstanding! 7 ; )
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Date: 9/3/2016 10:41:00 PM
like a ripple crossing a lake or a bird gliding beneath a blue canopy this poem draws you in with its wonder..well done and good luck
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Date: 9/3/2016 9:52:00 PM
I can just envision the mysterious, mossy forest in your amazing and sensuous poem, Connie! A 7+ :)
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Date: 9/3/2016 8:00:00 PM
Hi I haven't been a member long - love this write such great use of words well done - I hope you can look at my work also - Ill be back to look at more of your beautiful words x
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Date: 9/3/2016 6:27:00 PM
Pretty gorgeous so far! Keep it going, Constance :)
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Constance La France
Date: 9/3/2016 6:48:00 PM
Laura, thanks for the compliment, it is sort of dark and creepy but that is what I love ~

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