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Within the Fog

The moonlight shimmered on the winding road A chilled wind rolled to battle and smite Slicing through the fog and croaking toads There was a blood curdling scream heard that night The fog's hand choked the throat of graves, as it passed the stone bridge grasping its iron gate Tall stones stood like marbled guards that wait These sentries for death moonlight illuminates A caretaker's eyes welded to shadows moving slow A scream, a wolf's howl pierced to intervene, the dark wings that flew by a dead willow Frightened the caretaker, his imagination he gleans No one knows of the caretaker's fate, or of the shadowed wings he had seen At each full moon near halloween, a scream and wolf's call is heard pure and clean They say ghosts had risen in the fog in flight, by the stone bride with its iron gate There was a blood crudling scream heard that night contest Ghost Stories 10/23/14

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Date: 11/5/2014 3:59:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Frederic
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Date: 11/5/2014 10:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your podium finish, Frederic! Very much deserved. Enjoyed this chilly, scary poem. // paul
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Date: 11/5/2014 9:58:00 AM
What an excellent poem! Congratulations on your well deserved win.
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Date: 11/5/2014 7:49:00 AM
dropping back with my congrats Frederic:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/4/2014 9:45:00 PM
I really enjoyed reading this very atmospheric and terrifying ghost story! I loved the rhyming and smooth flow of the words, also.... Congrats on your win, Frederic!
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Date: 10/23/2014 6:27:00 PM
A good, scary...edge of the seat, poem.
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Frederic Parker
Date: 10/23/2014 6:32:00 PM
thank you M.L. for the kindness
Date: 10/23/2014 11:20:00 AM
- A truly chilling ghost story, Frederic - Good luck in the contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Frederic Parker
Date: 10/23/2014 6:31:00 PM
Thank you Anne for your kindness
Date: 10/23/2014 11:00:00 AM
ooh Frederic this chilled me to the bone when I read it. Good luck with the contest:-) Hugs jan xx
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Frederic Parker
Date: 10/23/2014 11:09:00 AM
thank you Jan for reading and the kindness extended

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