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Within the Depths of My Vacant Soul

When she walked by my side on a lonely road And took me to the other side, much more verdant, Through the barren lands of scorched desert, Clueless I was about the paradigm of love. If only had I asked, she would’ve taken me there Into the sunshine from darkened shadows, From the juncture of fears and saddened tears. But I remained silent when it was time to speak Choosing to not tell her how much I loved her As I held the distance between bliss and sorrow, When impulsively I veered in the wrong direction. And I never saw the pastures beyond the hills Or beauty of the terrain past the river bend. Going where feckless ages have gone before Embarking upon a path well-traveled Ignoring pretty flowers in unkempt meadows. Yet, she came to rescue at the edge of my angst From caveats of today, cautions of tomorrow, Standing with me in the midst of winter-storm Promising spring flowers in colors of fall. I saw the blossoms that were about to bloom And blush on horizon hinting of the rising sun And I heard the tempo of a concert on piano, While roiled in turmoil of the unsaid, the unwritten, Hidden within the depths of my vacant soul; Incapable of voicing what the silence evoked. September 18, 2019 Placed 1st: Crossroads poetry contest Sponsor: Silent One Placed 1st: Strand contest #710 by Brian Strand

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Date: 11/14/2020 2:29:00 PM
I think you should have told her that you loved her. Lovely write, Vijay :)
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Date: 3/29/2020 12:42:00 PM
Vivay, an eloquent and elegant romantic poem. So many wonderful phrases with your rich imagery. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/29/2020 10:45:00 AM
Vijay loved the poem and congrats my friend on a beautiful top win!;)
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Date: 3/29/2020 9:41:00 AM
Fabulous! A deserving first placer, Vijay!:-)
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Date: 3/29/2020 8:40:00 AM
Congrats on your win and wonderful poem. JC Hawkens
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Date: 10/22/2019 11:47:00 AM
Lovely poetry of a gifted poet for all seasons.Best regards,https://www.amazon.fr/Unfinished-Poems-vol-1-Ovidiu-Marius-Boc%C8%99a/dp/6200107041
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Date: 10/14/2019 10:00:00 AM
Your soul is anything but vacant! Beautiful poetry!
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Date: 10/8/2019 8:12:00 PM
Profoundly penned ~ congrats!
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Date: 10/4/2019 10:06:00 PM
Vijay this is beautiful and expresses perfectly the anxt of crossroads..."While roiled in turmoil of the unsaid, the unwritten," Many congratulations!
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Date: 9/29/2019 7:28:00 PM
Congratulations on a beautifully written piece.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/30/2019 9:01:00 AM
Thank you Franci--much appreciate.
Date: 9/26/2019 5:36:00 PM
Congratulations for being #2 on best new poem list! :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/28/2019 8:06:00 AM
Thank you Heidi...appreciate, as always.
Date: 9/26/2019 6:38:00 AM
Vijay this is truly amazing ! One of my favourites, congratulations on your win :-) x
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/26/2019 5:15:00 PM
Thank you Elaine..much appreciate.
Date: 9/24/2019 12:58:00 PM
Vijay congratulations on your win in the contest with this excellent poem!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/25/2019 8:47:00 AM
Thank you Dear Heart--much appreciate your visit and comments.
Date: 9/23/2019 1:36:00 PM
Vijay, this is full of depth and wisdom. congratulations on your first place win.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/24/2019 6:59:00 AM
Much appreciate Jeanne--many thanks.
Date: 9/23/2019 12:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Vijay.. Your beautiful creativity had inspired me.. An exquisite and mesmerizing poem, my friend.. An instant fav for me!! Have a blessed day..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/24/2019 6:58:00 AM
Thank you Robertina--much appreciate..many thanks. A special thank you for the FAVE.
Date: 9/23/2019 10:50:00 AM
Congrats Vijay on this special write topping the contest. I can see all of the well deserved accolades are accumulating, and I just add my voice to the multitudes of well wishers!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/23/2019 12:33:00 PM
Thank you John..always a pleasure to read your kind thoughts..much appreciate your visit and comments.
Date: 9/23/2019 10:10:00 AM
My friend, Congratulations on your fine placement in SilentOne's Crossroads contest!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/23/2019 12:31:00 PM
Thank you Robert--much appreciate.
Date: 9/23/2019 9:20:00 AM
I see by the comments that this gem received top placement. I must say the judge has excellent taste. It seems my original assessment was accurate. ;0)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/23/2019 12:31:00 PM
So true, Richard..much appreciate your return visit..many thanks for the kind remarks.
Date: 9/23/2019 5:38:00 AM
Back with so many congratulations Vijay for your top place in this contest, a position that you truly deserved my friend. Well done dear Vijay. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Date: 9/23/2019 8:00:00 AM
Thank you my friend..a blessing for me to read your heartfelt congratulations..always a pleasure to read your thoughts, Ann.
Date: 9/23/2019 3:27:00 AM
- Congratulations on the top win, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/23/2019 7:58:00 AM
Thank you for the return visit and your cheers..much appreciate, Ann-Lise.
Date: 9/23/2019 2:19:00 AM
Wow... Such a beautiful write... Congratulations on your well deserved win...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/23/2019 7:57:00 AM
Thank you Supraja for your visit and kind feedback..many thanks. Haven't seen your poems in a while.
Date: 9/23/2019 12:40:00 AM
Congratulations on this wonder. Blessings
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/23/2019 7:52:00 AM
Much appreciate the return visit..many thanks, Regina.
Date: 9/22/2019 5:31:00 PM
Congratulations Vijay for your great, deserved win! :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/23/2019 7:50:00 AM
Thank you for the return visit..much appreciate the FAVE and your splendid comments, Heidi..many thanks.
Date: 9/22/2019 5:25:00 PM
I knew this one would be in the winner's circle, i had a feeling it would be in the top spot....congratulations my friend, well penned :) hugs
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/23/2019 7:49:00 AM
Much appreciate your return visit, Sandy..and your kind remarks..many thanks.
Date: 9/22/2019 4:15:00 PM
Your poem was fitting for the contest and as. Keats very deep... You always take the reader on a journey... Congratulations on your first place in the contests..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/23/2019 7:47:00 AM
I am honored by your comments, SO--especially coming from a gifted poet..much appreciate..many thanks.
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