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Within the Bramble

When the sun kisses the morning skies Soft fluffy clouds murmur like floating tides Dew drops coat leaves with faint sighs Gently caressing my petals open wide Showing off where the brambles lies The summer can no longer hide Natures beauty with a small surprise
7/5/2020 Sponsored by: Chantelle Anne Cooke

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John Fleming
Date: 8/30/2020 9:10:00 AM
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I thought I had already commented on this one...but, no. Glad I checked! It certainly is a little gem, Miss Chiri -- love it! Belated congratulations on a well deserved win. As always...with lots of affection. :) john
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/3/2020 5:20:00 AM
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Ahhh even if you had John I would have enjoyed another comment from you!:) thank you!:)
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 7/25/2020 7:06:00 PM
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A lovely image of nature, Congrats on your win. SuZ
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/3/2020 5:19:00 AM
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Thank you I appreciate your comment!:)
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/23/2020 4:32:00 AM
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This is so gorgeous Brenda. Congratulations on your win. Blessings and love :)
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/3/2020 5:19:00 AM
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Thank you so much!:)
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 7/13/2020 12:52:00 PM
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Short but divine Brenda! I loved it! Congratulations on your podium win! Blessings xxoo
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/13/2020 2:48:00 PM
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Thank you So much Connie!;)
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Date: 7/12/2020 7:37:00 PM
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Breathlessly well said, Brenda, my compliments for your endeavors truly and deserving win -- Aloha from Hawaii~@William
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/12/2020 8:09:00 PM
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William thank you my dear friend do glad you enjoyed it!;)
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John Watt
Date: 7/12/2020 7:33:00 PM
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Brenda, a delightful poem of the flower in the brambles, I love your last 4 lines especially. Congratulations on your win ~ John
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/12/2020 8:08:00 PM
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Thank you John! Always enjoy when you visit!;)
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Jcb Brul
Date: 7/12/2020 1:12:00 AM
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Simply beautiful. Congratulations on your win!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/12/2020 8:07:00 PM
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Thank you so much!;)
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/11/2020 11:53:00 PM
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Just lovely Brenda. So many beautiful images "when the sun kisses the morning skies." Congratulations on your winning placement! Warmest wishes
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/12/2020 8:07:00 PM
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Thanks so much Sam I appreciate your visit and comment!;)
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Winged Warrior
Date: 7/11/2020 6:47:00 PM
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Awesome write dear sis...congrats!!...the Unicorns are happy lol...bro bro :o)
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/11/2020 6:50:00 PM
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Ah bro bro I’m so happy you and the unicorns liked it!;) thank you so much!;)
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 7/6/2020 11:35:00 AM
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Summer prefers to accent your beauties rather then hide them. You can never hide talent when it comes to poetry, shine on girl, shine on !
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/6/2020 11:50:00 AM
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Pixie you are too king! Thank you so much!;)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/5/2020 3:53:00 PM
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Ooh, Brenda. I will be very, very careful not to 'get stuck!' ~ No Thrill in those Thorns
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/5/2020 10:57:00 PM
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Ah but they might hold an allure hahaha! Thank you Gershon I have miss your brilliant sense of humor!;)

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