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Within Loves Boat

Flying in the Heaven's birds softly whistling sweet magical music enchanting among'st the angels Smiling pouring out from the petals rising rose emotions Straight in front of me those eyes golden sparkled rising a sunshine golden treasure Listen to the heartbeats kissing you love glowing warm beautiful in the soul sparkling diamonds within a divine light A flawless beauty fills up inside sparkling with Heavenly love in your soul finds the gentleness of your peace sailing on deep ocean blue waves

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Gary Bateman

Date: 11/5/2014 7:55:00 AM

Liam My Mate!! Most Excellent as usual. I always expect no less from you. (I posted a poem today (5 Nov) and I am "currently" working now on the "Cold Moon" write. I will be in touch.) Leprechauns Always, Gary

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/5/2014 8:10:00 AM

smiling the ears are pointed skywards wonderful comment gary the leprechaun in me dancing a jig yeah i read your poem top shelf beautiful dear friend bless you

Timothy Hicks

Date: 11/3/2014 5:42:00 PM

Reads to me surreal, like in a dream that's too good to be true. What a feeling that must be for someone that actually holds this to be their reality.

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/3/2014 5:59:00 PM

well timothy the reality i found such purity looking into eyes of love always remains so beautiful a priceless gem wonderful comment dear pal thank you kindly deeply appreciated

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/2/2014 12:09:00 AM

Love most sublime , Liam. I love ocean imagery for this kind of a poem!!

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/2/2014 3:47:00 AM

ahh andrea your so sweet thank you kindly yeah the ocean always will bring the happiest memories walking on golden sands

Arthur Vaso

Date: 11/1/2014 11:59:00 PM

Very beautiful, I tried the love boat, I drowned!!!

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/2/2014 3:45:00 AM

we never truly drowned i was alone thinking of a love that felt pure when i write, to me the ugly faces are hate i try with love i always look to the gift of never ending beauty you only drown in pain of loss and take it from me i know were your coming from as my heart is also grieving

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 11/1/2014 10:45:00 PM

Dear Liam, your verses are to me as gentle and whispery soft as the petals of a rose. Just beautiful! Love and hugs! ;) xxxx D.

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/2/2014 3:39:00 AM

you are so sweet dear friend thank you so kindly just brought tears to my eyes bless you

Yanny Widjanarko

Date: 11/1/2014 10:38:00 PM

Hey Liam, this is such an enchanting poem :) you made my day :), thanks for the previous visit :D, wishing you a wonderful day there :D hug, Yanny

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/2/2014 3:37:00 AM

thank you yanny heartfelt wonderful comment deeply appreciated you also have a beautiful day