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Within His Her Eyes

He look her in the eyes like river flowing to the end of the rainbow Within his eyes to her eyes is like magic that multiply like passion on top of mountain top her heart screaming you can hear her heart beat echoing in the distance Within his eyes to her eyes is like a halo glowing in the distance shining down on our love our eyes is wondering into each other soul like a loin looking for his prey with passion Within his eyes to her eyes is making colorful communication like the ocean communicate with the heavenly rim

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Date: 11/8/2016 12:49:00 AM
Eyes are a barometer of emotion.... Congrats for being featured..
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Patrice Trice Jackson
Date: 11/8/2016 1:16:00 AM
Thank you Bernard I'm in tears because I took a chance putting my work and thoughts out to the masses in the response is amazing. I'm grateful for poetry soup community. The love and support is marvelous. You right the eyes are the most priceless feature on a human. blessings and love
Date: 11/6/2016 1:18:00 PM
- A great first poem, Patrice :) - Welcome to Poetry Soup - hugs from Norway // Sun :)
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Patrice Trice Jackson
Date: 11/6/2016 7:17:00 PM
Thank you so much Sunshine Smile. I'm humble for your response. Blessings to you

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