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Within His Heart

He lays there in his own world Living on memories of the past life as it is now, is just existing, memories, are remembered at last No longer knows who I am looking at me so scared. As though I would do him harm as I gently, help him feed I know he remembers that I love him when he forages within his heart’s pages the word love, carved forever, by his little girl, Even when he is in his rage, stages.* Penned 15 October 2016 *the ravages of Altzheimer's Disease......living in the past....in a life full of stages.

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Date: 10/29/2016 7:38:00 AM
Very touching Seren, my mother has it and I wrote a poem called "My Condition". Check it out if you have time.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/29/2016 9:47:00 PM
Thank you Phil I will do.....Seren
Date: 10/18/2016 7:13:00 PM
I love this write Seren. It better do well in the contest. For me this is a fav.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/18/2016 7:46:00 PM
thank you Maurice....Seren
Date: 10/16/2016 9:56:00 PM
I went through this with my Dad so I know how hard it is. Lovely write Seren.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/29/2016 9:48:00 PM
Hello Tim thanks for stopping by.....Seren
Date: 10/16/2016 2:38:00 PM
absolutely heartbreaking poem Seren:-( good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/16/2016 7:43:00 PM
thanks Jan, we will see......Seren
Date: 10/16/2016 8:25:00 AM
The realism of Altzheimer's is scary and devastating. This is so sad, but it is happening all around the world. Very moving, Seren.
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Date: 10/15/2016 11:16:00 PM
This is very beautiful, if sad.
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