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Within His Eyes

We’re dancing. As I gaze into his eyes so dark and beautiful, what do I see? Within his eyes - reflecting back to me - Love’s promise shines with warmth devoid of lies. For Silent One's When A Fourth Line Helps It To Rhyme! Poetry Contest Rhyme Scheme: ABba

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Date: 6/20/2018 6:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! All in the eyes. Romantic and real.
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Date: 6/16/2018 11:06:00 AM
Lovely Andrea, congrats :)
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Date: 6/14/2018 8:59:00 PM
Wonderful write, Andrea !:-) Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve ~’*
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Date: 6/13/2018 2:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your podium finish, Andrea! Eyes are always a fitting and inspiring topic in poetry writing! But...is it true that they never lie:) Regards // paul
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Date: 6/13/2018 2:23:00 PM
You re so right, the eyes never lie, we just need to look deep enough in order to know the truth, a really nice little 4 line poem and many congratulations on your wonderful win, good luck
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Date: 6/13/2018 10:30:00 AM
--And that's real warmth, devoid of lies, that is...Congrats on your winner, Andrea! :) gw
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Date: 6/13/2018 10:21:00 AM
Congrats on your win Andrea
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Date: 6/13/2018 7:38:00 AM
Congrats on your win for this awesome and beautiful piece. Faux
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Date: 6/13/2018 7:33:00 AM
Congratulations for your win Andrea :)
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Date: 6/13/2018 7:27:00 AM
- Congratulations on your little rhyme poem, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/13/2018 7:19:00 AM
Sounds like love Andrea... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 6/13/2018 7:08:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea. Tom.
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Date: 10/16/2016 8:56:00 AM
Andrea,I love your lovely 'reflections':)
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Date: 10/15/2016 8:54:00 PM
Yes, the eyes don't lie, but sometimes we just don't want to look that deep. Lovely Andrea! 7 ; )
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Date: 10/15/2016 5:44:00 PM
The truth shines bright between you. Lovely.
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Date: 10/15/2016 1:11:00 PM
Andrea this is so beautiful and the words just flow so well! Hugs!
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Date: 10/15/2016 8:52:00 AM
Yes, the eyes have it. Love, Dave
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Date: 10/14/2016 10:58:00 PM
I liked the reflection part a lot. It really drew me in
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Date: 10/14/2016 9:45:00 AM
Lucky to find such a love as this. Love your poetic dance.
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Date: 10/14/2016 8:56:00 AM
I used to go to dance halls. I now forgot how to do West Coast Swing! Is love where it's at? Interesting work here! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 10/14/2016 6:55:00 AM
AD, Definitely not a Trump poem. You should write a poem about his escapades. Jim Horn
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Date: 10/14/2016 2:28:00 AM
Yes the eyes do have their own language, don't they... Beautiful Andrea.. /|\
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Date: 10/13/2016 10:35:00 PM
This is so beautiful. Love the feeling this poem evokes. A fav. :)
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Date: 10/13/2016 10:09:00 PM
Lovely, Andrea!
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Date: 10/13/2016 8:47:00 PM
Lovely Quatrain Andrea...best wishes
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