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Within Her Eyes

Within her eyes, once I lifted the veil, Elation, I found, in shimmering tears, A happiness vowing love would prevail, And it has, indeed, through decades and years. October 23, 2016 Brief Memories Contest FJ Thomas

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Date: 9/24/2018 4:15:00 PM
Nothing is more beautiful than when a new bride looks into the eyes of her groom. True Love Endures.
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Date: 11/17/2016 7:19:00 PM
David congratulations on your win in the contest with this wonderful poem ~
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Date: 11/4/2016 3:43:00 AM
Very "Mushy", Dave. However, very beautiful too and my kind of thing.
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Date: 10/23/2016 12:56:00 PM
This is beautiful. :)
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David Bose
Date: 10/23/2016 7:21:00 PM
I guess it's what I called "mushy" as a kid. Now I'll read it to her and see how far it gets me! Thanks, Heidi!

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