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Writhing thoughts tangle and swirl Inside my head, darkly Teasing and taunting making me long Hoping for light so sweet Inside my head I'm already dead Nothing but light can atone

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Date: 3/25/2016 11:32:00 PM
M Kari, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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M. Kari Barr
Date: 3/28/2016 12:08:00 AM
Thank you. I have one last week of college and then no more classes until fall so yes, I do think I will return to writing more poetry ^_^

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