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Throbbing spirits spawn, Projecting human colors, Through reality.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/11/2010 12:58:00 PM

Nice visual. Write on, Robert!

Jeralynn Clark

Date: 3/11/2010 6:36:00 AM

We are responsible for that which is within us! Nice write Robert! J

Richard Pickett

Date: 3/10/2010 8:06:00 AM

Nice write as always, good flow here Robert...It's good to be back....Your Friend Taz...

Mary Meade Stephenson

Date: 3/8/2010 9:06:00 AM

A superbly written senryu Robert...deep and thought provoking! Great job! Thanks so much for sharing! God Bless~Mary

Daver Austin

Date: 3/7/2010 5:28:00 AM

Dear Robert. Are you a believer in auras? Maybe this fine senryu is not about auras, but I get dinged that way about it. At any rate you are kind of spooky. Me too. BIG LOVE, daver

Skat A

Date: 3/6/2010 5:29:00 PM

Most enjoyed, I find your poem intresting with a little deepness in it...

Linda Witt-King

Date: 3/5/2010 11:11:00 PM

That's deep. Really deep. Quite profound actually. I do believe you've captured the essence of it...how about you check your soup mail while I look up the difference between a Senryu poem and a Haiku poem.

Audrey Haick

Date: 3/5/2010 7:15:00 AM

..Wonderful Senryu, Robert! As usual, you inspire so many of us with your poetry! Thanks for reading and leaving encouraging words for me! Peace, Audrey

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/4/2010 7:05:00 PM

Luv your words Robert.. if for Raul's contest..good luck... it has a rare quality..luv.. "Sweetheart"

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/4/2010 6:29:00 PM

There is a surreal quality to this senryu that I find very intriguing, just as powerful as the message. Profound writing, Robert. Love, Carolyn