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Withering Petals

Withering petals from a red rose falling to ground, silently they fall,but in my mind make a large sound. © kash poet 2012 ==================000================== Placement:1st ;(March 2012) Contest:Twenty Twenty Sponsor:David Williams

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/5/2012 6:38:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Kash! Love this one ...blessings, Rhonda

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 3/3/2012 10:45:00 AM

Very cool contrast you put in here, kash! Really enjoyed this! Super congrats on your win :)

Ralph Taylor

Date: 3/3/2012 7:37:00 AM

Congrats, kash. Excellent, well deserved win. Nice going. Ralph

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/2/2012 11:31:00 PM

Congratulations here on the win of your fantastic poem, Kashinath!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/2/2012 7:51:00 PM

KASH... CONGRATULATIONS ..ON YOUR WONDERFUL WIN~ Have yourself a very nice night ;-)*always..pd

Sashi Prabhu

Date: 3/2/2012 7:50:00 PM

beautiful imagery in this rhyming couplet....congrats on the win`````````````~sashi

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/2/2012 5:40:00 PM

Congrats on your winning work..Enjoyed reading this eve..Sara

Samual Ronthorpe

Date: 3/2/2012 4:07:00 PM

Kash, another wonderful write. Well done. Congrats on winning David's contest.....................S.Ronthorpe

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/2/2012 10:57:00 AM

Pensive as you can sometimes be! and sensitive. Congrad's Light & Love

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/2/2012 9:48:00 AM

well, this is much deserved, kashi buddy!... win and win and win!...cingrats with hugggs!..:)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/2/2012 9:18:00 AM

congrats Kash on a superb win for this wonderfully creative write for challenge luv.. such beauty in two lines .. such emotion too..

Ilene Bauer

Date: 3/2/2012 7:53:00 AM

congrats on your win! nice one!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 3/2/2012 5:41:00 AM

Congratulations Kash like this a lot xx

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/2/2012 5:32:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in David William's "Twenty/Twenty" contest Cash. Love, Carol

M.I.A .

Date: 3/1/2012 8:42:00 PM

profound! as loud and clear as thunder! good luck on the contest

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/27/2012 10:29:00 AM

Yes ... Roses can leave many sounds in the brain,and hearts full of pain..Lovely post Kash.Is your son writing already?

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/27/2012 1:31:00 AM

where you been??... get the pen and glide, kashi!.:) huggs ( 4 30 pm)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/26/2012 10:10:00 AM

yoohoo, any new one, kashi??.. . come by! :) it's 1 10am here.. zzzz! :) huggs!

Wilma Neels

Date: 2/26/2012 7:20:00 AM

This is just awesome Kash, love the visual and sound effect your bring across with your couplet. All the best for the contest :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/25/2012 7:07:00 PM

Reads like a winner..Enjoyed reading this eve..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for stopping by..Thanks for noting check form..I am not sure what I did but it is definitely not what I had up there..It is a English Quintain..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/25/2012 5:30:00 PM

I like how you did a couplet too, Kash. WEll done for the contest. you have learned a valuable lesson in always using IMAGERY in your writing. Luv, Andrea