Withering Lows

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Paul Callus

Date: 12/17/2014 1:33:00 PM

No, not withering, but blossoming...because a flower such as you will always be drenched in showers of love. hugs // paul

Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/18/2014 3:42:00 AM

This is a delight to read, Paul. I do need to be drenched....Soaked to the core. Thanks for this lovely visit.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/17/2014 10:40:00 AM

Inside you is an eternal spring so you will never wither!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/17/2014 11:04:00 AM

Richard....You make me so happy with this post. I'm already starting to bloom. Thank you.

Justin Bordner

Date: 12/16/2014 8:55:00 PM

I've always loved how you make a visual art with the style you write your poems with, theres a potent feminine spirit to the way you do it Eileen. Your beauty isn't meant to wither, only to flourish through the droughts and downpours of inscrutable love...I won't let you wither...J.A.B.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/17/2014 3:18:00 AM

Justin...thank you for your visit and for the affirmation that my poetry speaks to you. You're one of my favorite people here. You are...and will always be. :) I see you as an eagle....flying strong and free. I hope you continue to soar, in your work, in your life, in your heart. I wish you every good thing...Thank you for watering this Desert Orchid. I'm refreshed.

Jan Allison

Date: 12/16/2014 2:40:00 PM

SOOOOO creative Eileen its a 7 from me!!! hugs Jan xxx

Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/17/2014 3:21:00 AM

:) Why thank you, Jan. :) How sweet of you. A seven is always a lovely treat for me. Hugs

David Meade

Date: 12/16/2014 1:05:00 PM

I love the creativity in this poem -- I am very visual and the words danced and the images flooded my brain -- I love it -- a water can of love -- pour on it on me!! Outstanding my dear Little One!! Hugs.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/17/2014 3:21:00 AM

I love the visual aspects of your poems, David. I'm glad I was able to flood your brain with these simple lines. Thank you...for loving it. I'm glad I was able to refresh your soul. Little One is grateful for your visit. You boost my spirits.