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With Roses In My Hand

Like the moon brightens the murky night, You have brightened my life in ways that no one ever could. In the windy winter days, In the smoky December nights, In the early morning and dusky afternoon, With grasses soft and green, With dew on the petals of every rose, I wish to be with you With my newborn heart in you. The spaces between your fingers are meant to be filled with mine, Your open arm is meant to be hugged by me. I dream of you and me forever It’s an irrevocable promise. In the July rain, I’d be with you under the same umbrella dancing with every splash of the rain. And when you feel cold I’d light the fire for you. In the Marigold field with cuckoo’s song and butterfly’s dance We would dance till sunset. And if the whole world collides We would outlast and outlive all. And amidst the storm I will be waiting for you With roses in my hand.
(in the name of "Anjuli" from "Kiran")

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/27/2013 3:37:00 AM
Congrats on your deserving win !! :)))))
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Kiran Bantawa
Date: 12/2/2013 6:04:00 PM
thanx!
Date: 11/27/2013 12:51:00 AM
so touching..love it Kiran, Congrats on the win and thanks for visiting mine >>charmane
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Kiran Bantawa
Date: 11/27/2013 1:29:00 AM
thank you very much.
Date: 11/26/2013 10:54:00 PM
Beautiful sweet write. I've said much the same to my love before :)
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Kiran Bantawa
Date: 11/27/2013 1:30:00 AM
thanks :-) :-)
Date: 11/26/2013 7:14:00 PM
So beautiful and romantic! A very heartfelt write! Wonderful work, Kiran!...Thanks for the great comments, once again!
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Kiran Bantawa
Date: 11/27/2013 1:31:00 AM
you are welcome, thanks for visiting!
Date: 11/26/2013 3:44:00 PM
Beautiful and romantic, my friend. I like, I like, I like!!! Licia :-)
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Kiran Bantawa
Date: 11/27/2013 1:31:00 AM
I also like it, thank you!
Date: 11/26/2013 9:18:00 AM
Wow congrats on a marvelous poem n win, written beautifuly romantic.:)
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Kiran Bantawa
Date: 11/27/2013 1:31:00 AM
thank you very much.
Date: 11/26/2013 7:35:00 AM
congrats to me! hahaha.. a very dear poem . thanks for the placement Linda.
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Date: 11/26/2013 7:33:00 AM
Beautiful! Simply beautiful! Stunning images. Thank you for visiting my poetry and your kind comments that led me here.
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Kiran Bantawa
Date: 11/26/2013 7:35:00 AM
thank you.
Date: 11/25/2013 2:35:00 PM
Very nice fresh metaphors [smoky December nights] [Marigold fields!] Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Kiran Bantawa
Date: 11/26/2013 6:49:00 AM
thank you very much.
Date: 11/22/2013 12:43:00 PM
How romantic, Kiran. Congrats!
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Kiran Bantawa
Date: 11/26/2013 6:49:00 AM
thanks for liking.
Date: 11/20/2013 9:42:00 PM
Hi Kiran, . Congratulations, thank you for the lovely entry. Goodnight. Luv~LINDA
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Kiran Bantawa
Date: 11/26/2013 6:51:00 AM
thanks for considering my poem and placing 3rd in your contest.
Date: 11/17/2013 8:32:00 AM
- A beautiful poem Kiran !!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Kiran Bantawa
Date: 11/26/2013 6:51:00 AM
thank you Anne.
Date: 11/16/2013 11:59:00 PM
This is just a perfect picture of love in motion, blessings Carl
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Kiran Bantawa
Date: 11/26/2013 6:51:00 AM
thank you Carl.
Date: 11/13/2013 8:18:00 AM
This is an exceptional piece. Romance distilled.
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Kiran Bantawa
Date: 11/16/2013 7:39:00 AM
thanks Richard!
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Kiran Bantawa
Date: 11/13/2013 8:45:00 AM
I'm grateful to you.
Date: 11/12/2013 11:42:00 PM
Oh! my this is of pure beauty... the imagery's beyond stunning... like the dusky afternoon look....xox..Linda
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Kiran Bantawa
Date: 11/13/2013 8:44:00 AM
wow.. thanks Linda.
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Kiran Bantawa
Date: 11/13/2013 12:04:00 AM
thank you so much.
Date: 11/12/2013 4:32:00 PM
You are such a romantic. Wonderful!!
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Kiran Bantawa
Date: 11/13/2013 12:07:00 AM
Hehehe :-)
Date: 11/12/2013 12:15:00 PM
Full of romance and i love the dance of butterfly o the eve...Enjoyed it
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Kiran Bantawa
Date: 11/13/2013 8:43:00 AM
thanks for liking Litan.
Date: 11/12/2013 11:04:00 AM
beautiful poem Kiran...best wishes
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Kiran Bantawa
Date: 11/13/2013 8:43:00 AM
thanks Joseph.
Date: 11/12/2013 8:51:00 AM
Wow! So sweet, lovely and romantic poem you've penned here my dear friend Kiran. You're a great love poet too. Kudos to you on this great work! I love it and so enjoyed. Thank you so much for sharing and your congratulatory comments on my poem. Have a great day! So happy & honored to be the first to comment on your poem. Love lots and big hugs, Leonora
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Kiran Bantawa
Date: 11/12/2013 9:44:00 AM
thank you so much Leonora.

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