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With Open Arms

Come to me my child Rest your head in my lap My hand strokes your wild curls Feeling the dampness on your neck Lamplight caresses your flushed cheeks Shadows waltzing on the walls You gaze at me with pools of wisdom Infinite eyes that have lived lifetimes Speaking silent words You gift me with your knowledge The fire in you burning bright Bringing me back to my heartbeat Which rises and falls in gratitude With your presence Come to me Mom Rest your tired feet upon my lap Let my eyes and heart envelop you I will massage away weary time Let me give you my touch Gifting you energy as I receive yours I look into your eyes surrounded with Father Times’s crevices Each line an active nuance A roadmap of your journey here in space and time A thumbprint of your joy and pain Remembering sitting on the countertop Cracking eggs in the bowl Making cake together Handing me the batter covered spoon so I could lick it And me giving it back so you could lick it too Come to me my love I long to feel your touch Cradle me in your arms so I can smell you Touch my eyelids with your gentle breath My fingertips awaken I feel your forehead, your neck, your chest My heart vibrates as I find your back Covering it with sweet kisses Come to me my friend We have journeyed through darkness We have waded through tar We have risen from the depths of the darkest oceans Sharing strength, inspiration, and resolution Come to me shy one Come to me stranger Come to me wounded soul Come to me frightened one Come close dear animals Fill me up with your breath and secrets Let me dance with your essence We are one intertwined soul united I open my heart to you Plants - germinate, flower and bloom Release your seeds To fly on the wind and the wings of falcons Bringing new life to distant shores Let us rise above the chatter Rise up with me above the dense greyness To sanctuaries in the sky Arriving at cloud castles Adorned with abundant neon moonbeam pillows To jump on and roll in Stardust silently falling Like snowflakes kissing our noses Velvet musical notes hover nearby Our forms expand as we join as one One light floating upward A fuzzy pink radiant vibration Our inhales and exhales merge Wrapped in sacred unity we rise further Heavenly fish swim by winking at us Winged dolphins join in leaping over lavender cloudbanks Starbursts and light bursts pulsate around us As we dance together in laughter

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Date: 9/3/2022 6:18:00 AM
Dearest Susan, I am in awe! Every time i read your poems, I wish I could write this way! How emotional, how lyrical, how sublime! My favourite poet, this has to go to my FAVES. I am not able to mention one line - each and every line from you here is divine! Susan, you are a gifted poet, and your poem is a magical one. Love and blessings. Keep creating such masterpieces ~ Mala
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Date: 9/5/2022 7:52:00 PM
Dearest Mala, I am honored and humbled by your words dear friend. You are such a special mind, heart and soul and I am in gratitude for you. Thank you thank you for your heartfelt comments and your fav. I am so very happy to share such loving space with you. Big hugs and love and blessings, Susan :) xx
Date: 8/23/2022 7:01:00 AM
Wow, emotive and stimulating Susan. An interrelated trip through all our relationships. Linda
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Date: 8/23/2022 12:58:00 PM
Thank you Linda ! Happy to ride this ride with you . Blessings, Susan :)
Date: 8/8/2022 4:41:00 PM
What great connections you portrayed.
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Susan Lawrence
Date: 8/19/2022 11:49:00 AM
Pashang, Thank you thank you. So happy for your visit. Susan :)
Date: 8/4/2022 9:53:00 AM
This poem comes to me like open arms that soothe and caress the soul within me. A fav for me to be read again and again for years and years to come. ^_^ JCB
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Date: 8/4/2022 2:16:00 PM
How wonderful to have you visit JCB and honored by your fav and lovely comments. I am thrilled you could journey with me . Big hugs and blessings, Susan :)
Date: 7/25/2022 10:26:00 AM
That's a beautiful write... Very well penned. Thanks for sharing. Stay blessed
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Date: 7/26/2022 8:03:00 AM
Thank you Paghunda ! I am enjoying reading your lovely poems . Blessings, Susan :)
Date: 7/18/2022 7:53:00 AM
"With Open Arms" is a wonderful write. I wish you would write more. Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away...........
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Date: 7/26/2022 8:03:00 AM
Thank you dear Paula ! Loving your writing ! Hugs, Susan :)
Date: 7/15/2022 9:41:00 AM
Dear Susan, Your poems always bring me to tears with their beauty. Such a sweet, precious poem to your child. So many lovely lines ~ this one I especially love ~ "velvet musical notes hover nearby"~
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Date: 7/16/2022 6:18:00 AM
Dear Ann, I am honored by your visit and kind words .I am thrilled my poem moved you . Your presence here is a gift . Sending you love and all good wishes. Susan :)
Date: 7/11/2022 7:54:00 AM
Especially poignant to me, the verses about your mom! I lost my Mom a year ago April. Oh how I would rub her feet, would love to make cookies once again. Us sisters made raisin cookies together this past December. We remember the beauty that is our mom. Hugs ~ Kim
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Date: 7/12/2022 6:13:00 AM
Dear Kim, Thank you for your visit and lovely comments. I adore my Mom and cherish all time spent with her . I am so sorry to hear about your Mom. These moments in time are so precious. How many sisters do you have ? I am one of 3! Nice you gathered to make raisin cookies together . Simple pleasures and wonderful to honor your Mom’s beautiful spirit . Hugs to you , Susan :)
Date: 7/9/2022 1:31:00 PM
Congrats on the POTD Susan, warmly deserved with nice imagery and insightfulness. Take care, Gordon
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Date: 7/12/2022 6:11:00 AM
Dear Gordon , Thank you my friend . I appreciate your visit and participation. Keep writing ! Blessings, Susan :)
Date: 7/3/2022 3:36:00 PM
Wow Susan first off Big Congratulations on your well deserved Win! i love your imagination and creativity. I think my heart skipped several beats reading this wonderful creation of yours. Your talents to reach the inner soul in your words is a quality few have. I am sorry I missed this when it was written and Im glad I found it. God bless you and keep writing, wow!
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Date: 7/4/2022 9:44:00 AM
Michael , Thank you for your visit and your abundant gracious comments . I am humbled by your response . I greatly appreciate your visit and participation in my journey. Blessings to you . I look forward to reading more of your poems ! Susan :)
Date: 7/3/2022 3:36:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD Susan, what beautiful invocation and musing!
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Date: 7/3/2022 3:16:00 PM
Thank you Silpika for your visit and lovely comments! Susan :)
Date: 7/2/2022 10:50:00 AM
Oh. This is amazing. Congratulations! Well written. A Fave for me! :)
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Date: 7/2/2022 4:26:00 PM
Thank you dear Heidi ! So appreciative of your visit and Fav! Blessings, Susan :)
Date: 6/25/2022 1:11:00 PM
Congratulations as well for POTD.
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Date: 6/25/2022 3:56:00 PM
Thank you my friend. Hugs, Susan :)
Date: 6/25/2022 1:09:00 PM
I can see why this resonates with so many people. A pure pleasure to read. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 6/25/2022 3:56:00 PM
Thank you Richard ! Thrilled with your visit ! Looking forward to reading more of your work soon ! Hugs, Susan :)
Date: 6/25/2022 12:38:00 AM
Woww such a heartwarming poem, sentimental and recalling the moments with the loved ones, unique as it appreciate the child, your parent as well as the spouse. I smiled at the cake batter stanza, how alike we all are yet we seek differences. Kudos!! Plz also read and comment on my newest poem too.
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Date: 6/25/2022 3:55:00 PM
Thank you for your visit S.zaynab ! Your comments are welcome and your participation cherished . Yes we really are all one - one heart - one breath - one energy - one collective soul. Enjoyed visiting your poem today . Blessings, Susan :)
Date: 6/24/2022 7:26:00 AM
Wow my dearest Susan, I have no words left to express how much you inspired me as I read this poetic gem of yours...What a masterpiece of yours...This is for sure a FAV., and a hearty congratulations though a little late, for the POTD honor...Have a blessed day dear friend...Big hugs...~ Ani
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Date: 6/25/2022 1:37:00 PM
Dearest Ani , You are such a shining light and radiant heart ! Honored by your words and Fav!I am always inspired by the beauty you create. So happy to have found you here . Big hugs my friend, Susan :)
Date: 6/21/2022 10:25:00 AM
Dear Susan, at the cost of repeating myself, I have to admit that there is satisfaction in answering to the urge of reading and rereading your captivating words. You have the ability to connect with your readers, drawing them into the vortex of your inspiration. Another addition to my favs, my friend. Also congratulations on p.o.t.d. award. Watm regards & Hugs // paul
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Date: 6/25/2022 1:35:00 PM
Dearest Paul, Thank you for gracing me your visit . I am so appreciative of your support and kind words and honored by your fav! You are such a special poet and person . Thank you for taking this journey with me . Big hugs and all good wishes . Love, Susan :)
Date: 6/18/2022 11:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD! It seems every poem you have posted earns POTD and/or POTW, so thank you for stirring the Soup! I guess that proves getting it right beats getting it posted! Aloha 'oe!
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Date: 6/18/2022 1:10:00 PM
Thank you my friend ! I value you more than words can say ! Hugs, Susan :)
Date: 6/18/2022 7:27:00 AM
Susan, yes belated congratulations for me as well! This is so enticingly beautiful in its welcome to the universe! Such wonderful lines, one and all, crafted by love! Exquisite!! Happy Saturday xxoo
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Date: 6/18/2022 11:01:00 AM
Mike, Thank you so much for your wonderful comments and congratulations. My heart is happy! You are such a special soul. Happy Saturday to you ! Hug, Susan :)
Date: 6/18/2022 6:51:00 AM
My belated congratulations for your POTD. How blissful is the relationship between mother and child and vice versa. A splendid poem. Pity I often forget to check the POTD's although the admiration were supposed to inform me.
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Date: 6/18/2022 10:59:00 AM
Thank you dear Victor for your return visit and congratulations. I am grateful for you. Thank you for taking this journey with me. Blessings my friend, Susan :)
Date: 6/17/2022 2:15:00 PM
Like snowflakes kissing our noses velvet musical notes hover nearby .........adorned with Abundant neon moonbeam pillows to jump on and roll in......our inhales and exhales merge wow dear friend what sa radiant magical poetic imagination you have been gifted wit. A true blessing. Hugs and blessings Jennifer. POTD truly deserved dear Susan .congratulations.
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Date: 6/18/2022 10:57:00 AM
Dear Jennifer, You have such a special soul and are in-tuned to beauty around you. Your comments fill my heart. Thank you for your visit and presence. I appreciate you journeying with me. Big hugs to you, Susan :)
Date: 6/17/2022 11:13:00 AM
what a read, line by line swimming in the pools of wisdom's emotions....excellent
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Date: 6/18/2022 10:54:00 AM
Dear Timothy, Your presence here is so appreciated. I am honored by your comments. Blessings my friend, Susan :)
Date: 6/17/2022 1:35:00 AM
Superb! Wonder how I missed this one. The last two stanzas sum up the transition to unity consciousness so eloquently.
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Date: 6/17/2022 6:21:00 AM
US - Thank you for your visit and comments. You are king at writing about unity consciousness! Blessings, Susan :)
Date: 6/16/2022 6:02:00 AM
Dear Susan, it is my great pleasure to return to you with my heartfelt congratulations for this exquisite poem being honored with POTD. Your rich, embracing and transcendent poetry gently cradles and lifts the heart and soul of the reader.. and I relish the awe-inspiring feeling. May my warmest wishes find your moonbeam pillows, my sweet poetry sister.. ~Susan
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Date: 6/16/2022 5:51:00 PM
Poetry sister Susan , your kind words and your second visit leaves me filled with a deep sense of warmth and satisfaction. I feel your hugs from distances far away and I’m very grateful to have you in my life. Wishing you the sweetest dreams as well on moon being pillows. Hugs and love, Susan
Date: 6/15/2022 10:49:00 PM
Susan, you stand with hands wide open to embrace each one, each bird and beast and each breathing thing in the enclosure of unity. The conversation between the mother and child is so delightful and heart warming. When boundaries fall down and each one is bonded together in oneness, there arises, dance and symphony, mirth and laughter. Great poem as ever. Congrats on the well deserved POTD
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Date: 6/16/2022 5:49:00 PM
Dear Valsa, So very happy for your visit and your wonderful comments. I always love your words and your heart on display in your poems. You have such a deep mind and heart. I have been enjoying your work. Big hugs to you and all good wishes love, Susan
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