With Me

To be with me? Well take my hand and let us see. What dreams may come, What things could be, If you my love, Would be with me.

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Cecilie Bronte

Date: 5/1/2010 1:42:00 AM

If only it were that easy! I greatly enjoy reading your poetry, keep them coming (: Cecilie

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 12/22/2009 6:01:00 PM

enjoyed reading

Jane Peterson

Date: 12/15/2009 12:56:00 PM

I enjoyed reading this poem as well as your others!

Steve Malebranche

Date: 12/12/2009 12:57:00 AM

My sentiments exactly. If you want to be with me then ride with me through it all to see where we will be taken. wonderful piece....welcome to PS.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/11/2009 4:02:00 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Micah. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol